Wonderer67
Optimistic nihilist
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Hello all. I’ve written five or six stories. I think they’ve been mostly well received.
My wife and I are writing some short autobiographical stories about our sex life. It’s a told in third person with some of my wife’s quotes are there to give some first person viewpoints.
it reads to me like a history almost. But would love some feedback and editorial advice.
This first chapter is 2350 words and I expect subsequent chapters to be around the same. Probably slightly less.
-w
My wife and I are writing some short autobiographical stories about our sex life. It’s a told in third person with some of my wife’s quotes are there to give some first person viewpoints.
it reads to me like a history almost. But would love some feedback and editorial advice.
This first chapter is 2350 words and I expect subsequent chapters to be around the same. Probably slightly less.
-w
