Looking for ctiticism

[SuperShyGuy]

I'm sitting down to try and sart writing a bit. I've only ever posted one story (My Day With Gillian Anderson) but I'm interested in writing some more. I was hoping some authors would take the time to read my first submission and critique it for me before I write anymore. All feedback is greatly appreciated.

 

[wildsweetone]

Hi and welcome to Litland SuperShyGuy

I've sent you a pm. I hope it worked. I am constantly being unregistered today.

wildsweetone

 

[MathGirl]

Criticism

Dear SSG,

If you're looking for criticism, you've certainly come to the right place. You have stumbled onto just about the most critical bunch you are ever likely to meet.

If it's the milk of human kindness you're looking for, you'd have better luck at a cannibalism or vampire site.

Just trying to be helpful.

Ps. Seriously ..... If you'd like to send your story to me at mathgirl183@yahoo.com, I'd be glad to take a look at it.

Diane

 

[daisie]

What a coincidence! I'm looking for cliticism!

D (for whom the Japanese are a fetish)

 

[flawed_ethics]

D (for whom the Japanese are a fetish)

So what, you consider freaking an asian a fetish, or do the Japanese consider you a fetish?

SuperShyGuy - I'll be sending a feedback response later today. In the future, you might consider posting a link to your story though. Good luck!

 

[MathGirl]

cliticism!

D (for whom the Japanese are a fetish)

At least I got it, D.

 

[daisie]

So what, you consider freaking an asian a fetish, or do the Japanese consider you a fetish?

Both, sweetie.



D

 

[daisie]

At least I got it, D.

Whew. I will have to stick around you.

D