Looking for Chastity Story Editor

[Gizzcuck]

Good evening everyone,
I am looking for an editor who has an interest in Male Chastity for two chapters of a story I have written so far. Further chapters progress more so into cuckoldry but the first 2 chapters deal with the wife placing the husband into chastity in a loving relationship.

Chapter 1 was submitted and rejected due my format of the dialog. I have since read the FAQ on dialog and made a second pass to edit the format of the dialog.

I am looking for someone who will review grammar, spelling, and story structure. This is my first story so I am very open to suggestions and take criticism well. Please send me a PM if you are interested in lending a helping hand.

Thanks in advance for any help.
Gizz

 

[driphoney]

In order for anyone to PM you, you need to turn on private messages. Go to the User CP thingy at the top, then select Edit Options, then look for Private Messaging and click Enable Private Messaging, be sure to scoll to the bottom and click Save Changes.

Good luck.

 

[Gizzcuck]

Thank you for looking out for me driphoney. I was kinda curious why I could only get to my inbox from my CP. Now i know, haha.

Gizz