Looking for Beta Readers - First Time Author

[Scoobisnacks]

Hi everyone,

My name is Scoobisnacks and I have been reading Literotica for years. I first discovered the site in 2010, but never bothered to make an account until recently. I am interested in finding some beta readers as I recently decided to try my hand at writing.

The story I have created is intended to be two parts and as of right now only the first part is ready for beta reading and editing. The tale is about Sylvie, a 24-year-old college senior, and is told from her perspective. Sylvie is mildly autistic and still a virgin. Her friends, Anna and Jake, agree to help her with her problem.

I would describe the story as a bit of a slow burn. I tried to keep bringing the reader's mind back to the idea of sex so the anticipation would build while you're reading.

Part 1 is 9291 words in its current state.

Here's the type of feedback I am most interested in (any and all feedback would be appreciated, especially critical feedback):

• What did you like? Why?
• What did you not like? Why?
• Do you suggest any story edits? Why?
• What would you like to see happen in part two?
• What Literotica category do you think it belongs in?

I feel like I'm solid on grammar an spelling, but if a beta reader notices something I absolutely would love for it to be pointed out. Don't want to miss something.

If you're interested please respond here or shoot me a DM.

Thanks in advance!

 

[Scoobisnacks]

Thanks everyone!

I got some offers to beta read and edit. Thanks so much to BernadetteRochelle, Chris6160, and Shelleycat1!!! You all rock and I appreciate your help.

I have submitted my first ever story on Literotica! Woo!