The story's about a woman who is abducted to serve as a domestic servant for two criminals. It contains strong sexual themes - the two criminals certainly traumatize the woman - but very little actual sex.
The main kind of feedback I'm looking for is the "why didn't they ..." kind, since I aim for realism. For example, part way through writing the story I realized that given the time frame, the woman ought to experience a menstrual period, and I needed help to construct that scene. Similarly, fertility awareness was also something I needed to Google for (apparently fertility rises immediately after menstruation, which influences some of the events in the story). It'd be great if you know these things or will think of similar things. There are a variety of other things that would be great to know as well, such as cooking, housework, and life during winter.
Let me know if interested. I'll name a character in the story after you. There are currently:
- One female protagonist.
- Two male protagonists.
- One male minor character (mentioned a lot, but says only one word the entire story).
- Two genderless characters (they are different aspects of the woman's psyche; currently not named, but can be).
The main kind of feedback I'm looking for is the "why didn't they ..." kind, since I aim for realism. For example, part way through writing the story I realized that given the time frame, the woman ought to experience a menstrual period, and I needed help to construct that scene. Similarly, fertility awareness was also something I needed to Google for (apparently fertility rises immediately after menstruation, which influences some of the events in the story). It'd be great if you know these things or will think of similar things. There are a variety of other things that would be great to know as well, such as cooking, housework, and life during winter.
Let me know if interested. I'll name a character in the story after you. There are currently:
- One female protagonist.
- Two male protagonists.
- One male minor character (mentioned a lot, but says only one word the entire story).
- Two genderless characters (they are different aspects of the woman's psyche; currently not named, but can be).
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