Tundra54123
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- Dec 21, 2008
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Hi,
I'm looking for someone to edit a new story I've written, it's currently just under 15,000 words. I'd put it into the bdsm category although it's not particularly strong on pain as that's not really my thing, it's more about submissiveness and bondage really. It's about a girl's first day at a new academy, but obviously a bdsm type academy. It's set in the same universe as my last story (http://www.literotica.com/s/elmswood-academy-road-testing), which I didn't have edited and I think it kind of shows in places.
This story is really the first chapter of what I hope will become a long story arc and I'm Ideally looking for someone (preferably female seeing as how I'm male and it would be good to have opinions from a different viewpoint) to read through and give suggestions about plot, characters, where maybe it might be a little slow etc. as well as grammar. I'd then like to go through it and sort it out and have it looked over one final time before I submit it.
If anyone is interested at all let me know. I'm just going through it now and trying to sort out a few bits that don't read well. I'm away for the weekend but should have it ready definitely by the beginning of next week and just thought I'd see if anyone was interested. Let me know if you are and thanks in advance for your time.
I'm looking for someone to edit a new story I've written, it's currently just under 15,000 words. I'd put it into the bdsm category although it's not particularly strong on pain as that's not really my thing, it's more about submissiveness and bondage really. It's about a girl's first day at a new academy, but obviously a bdsm type academy. It's set in the same universe as my last story (http://www.literotica.com/s/elmswood-academy-road-testing), which I didn't have edited and I think it kind of shows in places.
This story is really the first chapter of what I hope will become a long story arc and I'm Ideally looking for someone (preferably female seeing as how I'm male and it would be good to have opinions from a different viewpoint) to read through and give suggestions about plot, characters, where maybe it might be a little slow etc. as well as grammar. I'd then like to go through it and sort it out and have it looked over one final time before I submit it.
If anyone is interested at all let me know. I'm just going through it now and trying to sort out a few bits that don't read well. I'm away for the weekend but should have it ready definitely by the beginning of next week and just thought I'd see if anyone was interested. Let me know if you are and thanks in advance for your time.
