Looking for an Editor

[redheadluvr83]

Hi I am a first time author and have a story that I have been working on that I would like a second pair of eyes look over for mistakes, story holes, etc. before I post on the main site.

There is some BDSM, Daddy-Little Girl, Exhibition, Lesbian, FFFF, MFF, and Voyeur in the story.

Right know it is about +22,000 words broken into 9.5 chapters (I am finishing the last chapter now.

Send me a PM if you are interested, and I will get back to as soon as I can!

Thanks!

 

[RuzieD]

what is the story about? What's the log line?

I do like Exhibitionism.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Hi I am a first time author and have a story that I have been working on that I would like a second pair of eyes look over for mistakes, story holes, etc. before I post on the main site.

There is some BDSM, Daddy-Little Girl, Exhibition, Lesbian, FFFF, MFF, and Voyeur in the story.

Right know it is about +22,000 words broken into 9.5 chapters (I am finishing the last chapter now.

Send me a PM if you are interested, and I will get back to as soon as I can!

Thanks!

Make sure the little-girl is 18.

 

[emeraldmbuku]

I can take a look at your writing, if you would like

 

[redheadluvr83]

what is the story about? What's the log line?

I do like Exhibitionism.

A shy man who decides to go out on a date with a chick she met online, and decides he wants to spice his life up a bit...

Make sure the little-girl is 18.

She is in her late twenties-early thirties. I'm no pedo-bear!

I can take a look at your writing, if you would like

Sent you a PM