sissyneko
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- Dec 14, 2011
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I have just finished the second chapter to my story 'A Sissy's New Daddy" I was hoping to find an editor to look it over before posting. I am happy with the piece and would feel better if I could get a second pair of eyes to read it over before I post it.
Length - 13,010 words
Category - Transsexuals & Crossdressers
Tags - Blackmail, Humiliation, Male Dom, Crossdresser, Gay Male,
I am mainly looking for punctuation and spelling. Though I would appreciate any suggestions on tone as well. I will include the link to the first part so you can get an idea what the story is. Thanks for taking the time to read this and I hope you are able/interested in helping. If you have any other questions please feel free to ask.
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-sissys-new-daddy
Length - 13,010 words
Category - Transsexuals & Crossdressers
Tags - Blackmail, Humiliation, Male Dom, Crossdresser, Gay Male,
I am mainly looking for punctuation and spelling. Though I would appreciate any suggestions on tone as well. I will include the link to the first part so you can get an idea what the story is. Thanks for taking the time to read this and I hope you are able/interested in helping. If you have any other questions please feel free to ask.
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-sissys-new-daddy
