Looking for an Editor

[Amela]

So, I wrote a little piece. It's 938 words. I would like to find someone to look it over and tell me their thoughts. It is non-erotic. Basically, as far as thoughts go, I would like to know how well the voices of the characters are conveyed, how well the piece is structured and whether or not you found it interesting. Once again, it is non-erotic so don't be looking forward to something hardcore and full of sex. There isn't even the mention of sexuality at all.

Also, if you're one of those people that is just curious as to what I have written, go ahead and reply, as well. I don't mind sending this piece to people who don't necessarily want to edit it. However, I would really appreciate your thoughts. Any comment can be turned into something helpful.

Thank you,
Amela

 

[Oralist49]

I would love to.....

Amelia,

Please do send whatever it is that you have written to me! I would LOVE to read it, and offer
whatever suggestions that may occur to me. And YES.... even if there is no sexual content to
it whatsoever! As a matter of fact, I am glad to find someone coming to us with non-sexual
writing. I'm not certain why... but I am!!

Feel free to send me whatever you like, either here or at my regular e-mail address (if you wish)
which allows more freedom and ease than can be found here within "Literotica"'s forum - that is
you can write as much as you want and we're not limited as to how many e-mails we can keep,
etc. My regular e-mail address is: [personal info prohibited per our forum guidelines]


I hope to hear from you soon!

- Brian.

 

[Amela]

Thank you very much for wanting to help! The e-mail address you wrote was not allowed by Literotica. Could you send a private message and we can go from there?

Thank you,
Amela