The editor I was working with previously is unable to edit atm, so I'm looking for somebody else to help me out with my story.
I have done most of the work on finishing some large overhaul's and changes to my original story, which is story that starts as incest but moves into a story more about discovering the main characters personal desires and things. I've had complaints because the story ends with the incest well, ending, but while I write for my audience I also write for myself, and for my characters. I'm looking for somebody who can do some edits on this story, a little grammatical but I made a large change recently and also need a little help finding any contradictions this caused. (Originally they main characters never engaged in intercourse, but my last editor and I discussed it and decided that intercourse could be worked in at one point to change the dynamic a little.)
I've been writing this story for nearly 6 years, it is at 33500 words currently, and I expect about another thousand words to be added to the end over the next week as I add the last part of the last chapter.
You can read the original version of the story here if you wish an idea of how I write.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=438961
And I can confirm that is me by logging in that account or whatever if you're worried about plagiarism, I decided awhile back that I wanted to start publishing under a pen name, and once I have published the story under this screen name will have it removed from my old username.
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I am also looking for another story to be edited, this one I have only recently begun, it is not incest, but rather involves a married pregnant couple who end up having a bi-sexual three way with another man. Currently it is just over 5500 words, I may end it here, but I may not I'm looking to see how it is received before I make a final decision on that.
This story has never been edited before, and as such will need a bit more grammar help (I over use comma's and I have some weird blindness that doesn't allow me to find them when I go back through and edit >.<) but I am also interested in help with pacing and such, I like an editor who is willing to give their idea's and help me figure out problems, not just fix my grammar/spelling. If I can't find that I'll live, but ideally that is what I'd have.
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I have a third story I may be working on as well, but I haven't fully made up my mind, it is a fantasy incest set in the world of a Song of Fire and Ice by George RR Martin. I think it has a lot of potential but I am struggling with how to turn a few scenes of intense twincest into a real story, and if after working through the other two stories I decide to continue with this one would probably desire editing help with it as well.
Anyway feel free to PM me and we can discuss further.
I have done most of the work on finishing some large overhaul's and changes to my original story, which is story that starts as incest but moves into a story more about discovering the main characters personal desires and things. I've had complaints because the story ends with the incest well, ending, but while I write for my audience I also write for myself, and for my characters. I'm looking for somebody who can do some edits on this story, a little grammatical but I made a large change recently and also need a little help finding any contradictions this caused. (Originally they main characters never engaged in intercourse, but my last editor and I discussed it and decided that intercourse could be worked in at one point to change the dynamic a little.)
I've been writing this story for nearly 6 years, it is at 33500 words currently, and I expect about another thousand words to be added to the end over the next week as I add the last part of the last chapter.
You can read the original version of the story here if you wish an idea of how I write.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=438961
And I can confirm that is me by logging in that account or whatever if you're worried about plagiarism, I decided awhile back that I wanted to start publishing under a pen name, and once I have published the story under this screen name will have it removed from my old username.
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I am also looking for another story to be edited, this one I have only recently begun, it is not incest, but rather involves a married pregnant couple who end up having a bi-sexual three way with another man. Currently it is just over 5500 words, I may end it here, but I may not I'm looking to see how it is received before I make a final decision on that.
This story has never been edited before, and as such will need a bit more grammar help (I over use comma's and I have some weird blindness that doesn't allow me to find them when I go back through and edit >.<) but I am also interested in help with pacing and such, I like an editor who is willing to give their idea's and help me figure out problems, not just fix my grammar/spelling. If I can't find that I'll live, but ideally that is what I'd have.
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I have a third story I may be working on as well, but I haven't fully made up my mind, it is a fantasy incest set in the world of a Song of Fire and Ice by George RR Martin. I think it has a lot of potential but I am struggling with how to turn a few scenes of intense twincest into a real story, and if after working through the other two stories I decide to continue with this one would probably desire editing help with it as well.
Anyway feel free to PM me and we can discuss further.
