Looking for an Editor

[mikeaday]

my story was rejected for spelling and grammer and i am looking for someone to help me with those.

The story is about a father who has sex with his wife and watches his daughter pee. i may add more incest later. i have added a few paragraphs to the story i submitted.

if interested let me know
cheers
mike

 

[adsingh]

An idea which is my fantasy...
i would request you to write an indian aunt- nephew incest story in which the nephew wants to have sex with his aunt but cannot .. because his aunt is reluctant.. and then they are alone a weekend together aunt tells nephew he should tell her the truth about why he keeps on looking her ass and breasts.. against she will show a body part of her to him while they sleep together.. and when they sleep the sex happens......
hope you write this one!!!!

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

An idea which is my fantasy...
i would request you to write an indian aunt- nephew incest story in which the nephew wants to have sex with his aunt but cannot .. because his aunt is reluctant.. and then they are alone a weekend together aunt tells nephew he should tell her the truth about why he keeps on looking her ass and breasts.. against she will show a body part of her to him while they sleep together.. and when they sleep the sex happens......
hope you write this one!!!!

Wrong forum, sorry. Post it to "Story Ideas" and you may find someone.