JoshuaGlynn
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- Nov 5, 2007
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Hey guys and gals,
I have to apologize as I requested an editor several months back, and then never got a chance to follow up on it as life got in the way.
I have a story I'm planning on running on Lit. It is a Gay / slightly bi story about two best friends who discover how much they mean to each other, when one of them is presumed dead/missing for 6 months. It is a Vampire romance... (and yes it was written several years ago well before anyone had heard of Ms Myers)
I am a mild dyslexic also so I tend to swap related words a bit... so being able to spot that kind of an error is a huge plus!
Here is a sample from the opening chapter, just a few paragraphs:
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The night is filled with the unknown. Since the beginning of time people have both feared and worshiped the nocturnal. The darkness is ruled by the supernatural and the occult. It holds the basis for every person’s primal childhood fears. I was never afraid of the night myself, but it changed my life forever.
My name is Ryan Carlyle. I’m Twenty and look at the world through bright green eyes that often get startled looks from others. I’m on the college swim team and always get complements on my body. I had lived in the same small town; just outside of the city all my life and I knew practically everyone. I just love the feel of the wind blowing off of the lake.
I’m an only child, but I do have a brother. I’ve known Coby Daniels for as long as I can remember. Our parents were good friends long before we were born. They would take turns watching “the boys” as we were growing up. So we spent a lot of time at each other’s houses. We like to think of ourselves as brothers. Coby stands out because of his tall thin frame and bright red hair that he keeps trimmed short.
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or if you want to view previous works
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=913817&page=submissions
Thanks
Josh
I have to apologize as I requested an editor several months back, and then never got a chance to follow up on it as life got in the way.
I have a story I'm planning on running on Lit. It is a Gay / slightly bi story about two best friends who discover how much they mean to each other, when one of them is presumed dead/missing for 6 months. It is a Vampire romance... (and yes it was written several years ago well before anyone had heard of Ms Myers)
I am a mild dyslexic also so I tend to swap related words a bit... so being able to spot that kind of an error is a huge plus!
Here is a sample from the opening chapter, just a few paragraphs:
__________________________________________________________________
The night is filled with the unknown. Since the beginning of time people have both feared and worshiped the nocturnal. The darkness is ruled by the supernatural and the occult. It holds the basis for every person’s primal childhood fears. I was never afraid of the night myself, but it changed my life forever.
My name is Ryan Carlyle. I’m Twenty and look at the world through bright green eyes that often get startled looks from others. I’m on the college swim team and always get complements on my body. I had lived in the same small town; just outside of the city all my life and I knew practically everyone. I just love the feel of the wind blowing off of the lake.
I’m an only child, but I do have a brother. I’ve known Coby Daniels for as long as I can remember. Our parents were good friends long before we were born. They would take turns watching “the boys” as we were growing up. So we spent a lot of time at each other’s houses. We like to think of ourselves as brothers. Coby stands out because of his tall thin frame and bright red hair that he keeps trimmed short.
____________________________________________________________________
or if you want to view previous works
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=913817&page=submissions
Thanks
Josh
