Looking for an editor or editors for my second story. Haven't had much luck cherry picking VE's from the list.
Title: Black & Tan Blues Ch. 01
Genre: Loving Wives (Cheating Wives)
Size: 10k Words (.doc)
Story is written in 1st person - male perspective. Story takes place in the 70's. Might be helpful if the VE actually remembers that decade. Interested in not just technicals, but also opinion of story flow, dialogue accuracy, does it grab your interest, etc.
Prologue -
"This is a story that took place in the swinging 70’s. The Vietnam War and the draft were coming to an end. Richard Nixon really was a crook. We were still safe from HIV and AIDS. The internet was only a gleam in Al Gore’s eye. The first portable phones were just being developed by Motorola. And General Motors, Ford and Chrysler actually made cars that people wanted to buy. Life was good.
This is a work of fiction. But in every story there is a kernel of truth, an incident that really occurred or maybe a character or characters that really existed. With that said any similarities to persons living or dead is purely intentional."
First story published under itmgr2010
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1016456&page=submissions
Thank you,
itmgr2010@hotmail.com
Title: Black & Tan Blues Ch. 01
Genre: Loving Wives (Cheating Wives)
Size: 10k Words (.doc)
Story is written in 1st person - male perspective. Story takes place in the 70's. Might be helpful if the VE actually remembers that decade. Interested in not just technicals, but also opinion of story flow, dialogue accuracy, does it grab your interest, etc.
Prologue -
"This is a story that took place in the swinging 70’s. The Vietnam War and the draft were coming to an end. Richard Nixon really was a crook. We were still safe from HIV and AIDS. The internet was only a gleam in Al Gore’s eye. The first portable phones were just being developed by Motorola. And General Motors, Ford and Chrysler actually made cars that people wanted to buy. Life was good.
This is a work of fiction. But in every story there is a kernel of truth, an incident that really occurred or maybe a character or characters that really existed. With that said any similarities to persons living or dead is purely intentional."
First story published under itmgr2010
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1016456&page=submissions
Thank you,
itmgr2010@hotmail.com
