Looking for an editor

[champ1on]

Hi,

Im new here and have just written my first story but have no idea if its good enough for submitting. It a panty fetish story about 6000 words. Think the spelling and grammer wont be far off but the structure and flow of the story i think will need some tinkering. Hopefully someone can offer me some tips and tell me what i need to add/take out to make the story better.

Any help would be great

Thanks
Jason

 

[nstygrl22]

If you still need someone to look over your story PM me. I would be happy to help.

 

[wildehafer]

I am available to assist as well.