cartepostale
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Nov 17, 2006
- Posts
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The material for my stories is and will be from my fantasies and some real-life experiences. Ideally, I'd like someone who could advise me not just on grammar and punctuation and criticism on the way the story is going.
The story I'm working on at the moment is not finished, but includes:
MF sex
MMF sex
A woman in a tennis skirt
Lingerie
Woman urinates while male watches
I know that I need help with my grammar and puctuation, but am also open to constructive criticism in any other area an editor might be able to offer. I can only supply stories in Word Pad, Microsoft Works wordprocessor or in an email.
Thanks
Mark
The story I'm working on at the moment is not finished, but includes:
MF sex
MMF sex
A woman in a tennis skirt
Lingerie
Woman urinates while male watches
I know that I need help with my grammar and puctuation, but am also open to constructive criticism in any other area an editor might be able to offer. I can only supply stories in Word Pad, Microsoft Works wordprocessor or in an email.
Thanks
Mark