Looking for an Editor

[Glorieholes]

Hi I'm new here. I don't like rejection, so I try to be mindful of others. It's the main reason oridinary guys and girls get lucky with me.

If you are interested in editing my first story for Literotica, please let me know. Otherwise, thanks anyway.

The story is written in the first person. A girl takes a trip with her family to Florida and gets extreemly wild with everyone she come in contact with, including her family.

Please post your reply if you are interested.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Hi I'm new here. I don't like rejection, so I try to be mindful of others.
If you are interested in editing my first story for Literotica, please let me know. Otherwise, thanks anyway.

The story is written in the first person. A girl takes a trip with her family to Florida and gets extreemly wild with everyone she come in contact with, including her family.

Please post your reply if you are interested.

Your first sentence puts me out of the race to edit you as I reject, critique and I'm a total nuisance when I think that a story isn't that good

I hope you'll find someone to your liking....but...be aware that a good editor won't be simply holding your hand..he/she will also kick you in the butt if your story is a total waste of their time.

 

[Glorieholes]

Your first sentence puts me out of the race to edit you as I reject, critique and I'm a total nuisance when I think that a story isn't that good

I hope you'll find someone to your liking....but...be aware that a good editor won't be simply holding your hand..he/she will also kick you in the butt if your story is a total waste of their time.

I hope so too. I was so hoping to post my story on this web site. I would like a second set of eyes on it

 

[snooper]

Just to let you know you are not being ignored.

The story is written in the first person. A girl takes a trip with her family to Florida and gets extreemly wild with everyone she come in contact with, including her family.

I don't like first person, and I am not a girl on at least two counts (age as well as sex) so I don't think I would be much use.

 

[Glorieholes]

Just to let you know you are not being ignored.

I don't like first person, and I am not a girl on at least two counts (age as well as sex) so I don't think I would be much use.

Thank you for your consideration.

I am looking for someone to correct any grammatical errors that may be in my story, also possible wrong word usage. One of the Literotica members advised me to watchout for wrong words, so that is somethink else that I would like an editor to take a look at.

The story is very short. word count 7153. Reading level roughly 8th grade. Simple forward structure.

I really could use some help.

 

[BlackSnake]

Thank you for your consideration.

I am looking for someone to correct any grammatical errors that may be in my story, also possible wrong word usage. One of the Literotica members advised me to watchout for wrong words, so that is somethink else that I would like an editor to take a look at.

The story is very short. word count 7153. Reading level roughly 8th grade. Simple forward structure.

I really could use some help.

I'm sure that at least one of Lit's great editors will step up and help you with this. I would love to read it.