Looking for an editor.

[1seeyou69]

Hi. I tried using the volunteer editor page, without any luck. I've been patient, but no one responded.

My latest is the third in a series - the other two can be found in my profile https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1787539&page=submissions. It isn't absolutely necessary, but reading them first will help with character background, etc.

I'm an amature writer, but I think I have the spelling and grammer under control. I'm looking for someone to give it a once over to make sure I haven't missed anything obvious, but I'm open to any suggestions though that would make the story better and more enjoyable for the reader.


Thanks