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This is sad... I spend all my free time editing for other people, and I can't edit anything of my own right now...
I have an enormously complicated series of vignettes involving two characters over five hundred years of fucking/fighting/falling in love/falling apart. I need an editor who has no issue with serious squicks (trying to disembowel someone being foreplay, for example) who's willing to read and give criticism for this story.
Real criticism, not just flames. I know there's a few spelling errors (I will get them all eventually) and punctuation issues.... those I'm not worried about. I need real readers to tell me what they really think.
PM if you're interested, or if you want to see what you may be getting into, the second link in my signature will take you to DA. Open my journal and it's the most recent post... one of the Ashlee-Drakalen scenarios.
I have an enormously complicated series of vignettes involving two characters over five hundred years of fucking/fighting/falling in love/falling apart. I need an editor who has no issue with serious squicks (trying to disembowel someone being foreplay, for example) who's willing to read and give criticism for this story.
Real criticism, not just flames. I know there's a few spelling errors (I will get them all eventually) and punctuation issues.... those I'm not worried about. I need real readers to tell me what they really think.
PM if you're interested, or if you want to see what you may be getting into, the second link in my signature will take you to DA. Open my journal and it's the most recent post... one of the Ashlee-Drakalen scenarios.