Looking for an editor-Transsexual romance

[Dragonfire76]

Hello I've tried to post my first story on the board,corrected it myself the first rejection and decided I should look for an editor before the third. Not sure what else I should put in here except that the main character is a 20 year old straight male who's never really done much with a woman. And the love interest is a gothic goddess of a transgendered female. New city,new life kinda thing. So if anyone can help it would be taken with thanks and an edit credit.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[Dragonfire76]

Ok PM's are on now. Most forums they're on by default.

 

[Khasy]

Might be useful to specify why the story was rejected, and what kind of help you need?

 

[Dragonfire76]

Were there any serious errors in punctuation or formatting (i.e. submitted in all capital letters, capitalization errors, etc.)? Was the story not broken into appropriately sized paragraphs?

That was the reason,and at first I thought it was because I didn't space it at all,so I went through and cleaned it up as much as I could. Spaced paragraphs where I thought it was appropriate. I'm usually very good at spelling and punctuation.

 

[sr71plt]

Did you submit by cut and paste in the submission box (the least troublesome way on formatting)? Is there an extra line feed between paragraphs? (there should be.)

If you want someone to look at what you sent and maybe be able to tell you that it is an easily fixed formatting issue, you can PM me and I'll give you an e-mail to send it to as an attachment and maybe I can quickly see what the problem is.