Looking for an editor or beta reader

[sophism]

Hey all, I'm a first-time writer working on a story about characters at an academy with superhuman abilities. There are themes of NC and romance. What I have actually written so far is mostly setting the story, but I will have more written soon.

I'm looking more for feedback about the general storyline, though thoughts about structure, grammar, and readability is more than appreciated!

Currently, what I have for review is a little less than 3,000 words, but there is more written if you want to continue reading immediately.

 

[radlas1984]

Hey! As most of my regular authors have slowed down a bit I am looking for one or two additional authors to work with right now.

I will PM you more information about me as an editor.

 

[Gabriel1664]

story -- edit -- comment and whatever

Hey sticky peaches,

Gabriel here also online now ----- Enjoying your name -- and would love to talk/write over Skype or gmail or here.

The themes of the story sound great - the sort which I enjoy.
I'd be happy to comment at whatever level is good for you.
The themes and mood, the arc of the story, the detail, or even the commas if you want that too. And I can also let you know how it turns me on as well!!

I'm a lawyer - USA. Enjoy good food, being outdoors, travel, the mountains as well as the oceans, swimming, theater and more.

Tell me about you -- perhaps three mundane things and three more intimate things.

Write here or gmail xxxxx
Same name in skype xxxx
Gabriel


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