TwistedPlayr
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- Oct 1, 2003
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I'm looking for an editor to edit a story of mine that is around 151 pages. The story revolves around a man that is concerned about his wife cheating on him. An investigation proves him right, but everything is not as it seems. This leads him and his wife down a path of revenge and redemption.
The story hits quite a few subjects: Domination (male and female), lesbianism, multiple fetishes, anal and so on.
I have already posted the first few chapters, which count for about 1/4 of the story. I'm looking for an editor to assist in grammar and punctuation. I am not vain, and I eagerly accept plot or any other suggestions as well.
The first chapters are posted under the title 'Cheaters', so you can see if you like the work so far.
***The story is 75,500 words long, in case the page count was not enough***
The story hits quite a few subjects: Domination (male and female), lesbianism, multiple fetishes, anal and so on.
I have already posted the first few chapters, which count for about 1/4 of the story. I'm looking for an editor to assist in grammar and punctuation. I am not vain, and I eagerly accept plot or any other suggestions as well.
The first chapters are posted under the title 'Cheaters', so you can see if you like the work so far.
***The story is 75,500 words long, in case the page count was not enough***
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