Looking for an editor for my strip tease story

[XXXsxytxgrlXXX]

Hi,

I'm looking for help with my first story. It is a strip tease story, written in the first person.

It didn't get approved for these reasons:

Did I check to make sure everything was spelled correctly?
Please break up & fix the punctuation of your dialogue.


The story isn't very long. I would appreciate any help I can get.
Thanks

 

[sandmartin]

Sounds like something up my street!

Attach your story as a word document and email it to me at: Sandmartin70@yahoo.co.uk and I will happily take a look at it for you.


Sandy

 

[XXXsxytxgrlXXX]

Thank you.

 

[drumlord]

I'd be glad to help a cowgirl in distress

Strippers are my bread and butter (I work in a titty bar....ooops, I mean gentlemen's club) so I feel it's my duty to help get this story told.

Just do the same as Sandy requested of you, but send it to me, and I'll get right/off on it, doh!!!

Peace, love and SseeeeexXXX

SCOTTiE DJ
zzsedxx@yahoo.com

 

[Aleycat69]

Hi,

I'm looking for help with my first story. It is a strip tease story, written in the first person.

It didn't get approved for these reasons:

Did I check to make sure everything was spelled correctly?
Please break up & fix the punctuation of your dialogue.


The story isn't very long. I would appreciate any help I can get.
Thanks

Ahh, that'll be easy... pm me if you'd like I'll show you some of my work, not on lit...