I have a BDSM story that's on the long side (7,000 words). No nonconsent, and I think it's probably on the lighter end of the BDSM spectrum (although there is some pain). It's a story about a dom/sub relationship with some rough sex.
I'm an experienced writer, but this is my first full erotica story, and I'd love to have someone take a look at it. Grammar/spelling corrections are welcome, but it would also be great to get some feedback on the character and plot development as well as well as advice to make the story appealing to literotica readers. I have private messages turned on in case anyone would like to contact me that way.
Thanks in advance!
I'm an experienced writer, but this is my first full erotica story, and I'd love to have someone take a look at it. Grammar/spelling corrections are welcome, but it would also be great to get some feedback on the character and plot development as well as well as advice to make the story appealing to literotica readers. I have private messages turned on in case anyone would like to contact me that way.
Thanks in advance!
