tentoestoofar
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- Dec 30, 2019
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Hi all,
I’ve recently started posted stories here to the site and for my last effort I tried something completely different to straight up smut, instead trying my hand at writing some erotic horror. I love B movies and exploitation film so it was perfect for me to try and enter this kind of writing.
Unfortunately, my story, The Glow, was rejected on the grounds of it being Vore or Snuff, which I found to be quite a shocking conclusion - I would never want to write about either of those things lol
So, the plot of the rejected chapter is that a group of drunk teenagers visit a haunted house said to be the site of many Satanic orgies and rituals. One girl, a lesbian, is the first to encounter what I’ve called Ectonymphs, human creatures that live between death and life in a plane/dimension of infinite pleasure. If you’ve seen Hellraiser, I guess it’s kinda like that, only these creatures want to fuck rather than cause havoc lol
After a sexual encounter with these creatures, she is kissed by one, which transfers her spirit / soul / what have you over into the dimension of infinite pleasure. The shock closer to the chapter is that the teenage lesbian is standing alongside the two ectonymphs, and sees her body crumpled on the floor, apparently dead, and she screams out loud.
This was just a cliff hanger, the girl isn’t actually dead, she is just a different plane or dimension. I appreciate that this sounds absolutely ridiculous, but it is pretty hammy erotic horror, but I think it’s this apparent death at the end of the story which has triggered the manuscript rejection.
My question is, how can I alter the story so that it doesn’t get rejected by the filter? In the next chapter, several more stupid or horny teenagers were planned to be taken over in the other world, and in the conclusion, the smart one would bring them all back, save for one girl, who would be happier there and remain in the other world. I’m now afraid to continue in this vein, for fear it would be wasted if I couldn’t share the story.
So TLDR - From what I can tell, I think the main problem is that the that the girl is kissed and then appears to die (she doesn’t), and this was triggered as snuff?
I am looking for advice from lovers of or writers of erotic horror fiction - how do you work in line with Literotica’s Ts and Cs in regards to states that may resemble death, or leaving the “mortal plane”? Lol Or when dealing with ghosts, spirits and otherworldly creatures fucking?
I’ve never written this kind of thing before and have fallen fowl of the rules. I certainly don’t want to write death porn, or whatever the fuck “vore” is (unsure if I should even Google it).
Thank you for your time and I apologise for the ramble!
I’ve recently started posted stories here to the site and for my last effort I tried something completely different to straight up smut, instead trying my hand at writing some erotic horror. I love B movies and exploitation film so it was perfect for me to try and enter this kind of writing.
Unfortunately, my story, The Glow, was rejected on the grounds of it being Vore or Snuff, which I found to be quite a shocking conclusion - I would never want to write about either of those things lol
So, the plot of the rejected chapter is that a group of drunk teenagers visit a haunted house said to be the site of many Satanic orgies and rituals. One girl, a lesbian, is the first to encounter what I’ve called Ectonymphs, human creatures that live between death and life in a plane/dimension of infinite pleasure. If you’ve seen Hellraiser, I guess it’s kinda like that, only these creatures want to fuck rather than cause havoc lol
After a sexual encounter with these creatures, she is kissed by one, which transfers her spirit / soul / what have you over into the dimension of infinite pleasure. The shock closer to the chapter is that the teenage lesbian is standing alongside the two ectonymphs, and sees her body crumpled on the floor, apparently dead, and she screams out loud.
This was just a cliff hanger, the girl isn’t actually dead, she is just a different plane or dimension. I appreciate that this sounds absolutely ridiculous, but it is pretty hammy erotic horror, but I think it’s this apparent death at the end of the story which has triggered the manuscript rejection.
My question is, how can I alter the story so that it doesn’t get rejected by the filter? In the next chapter, several more stupid or horny teenagers were planned to be taken over in the other world, and in the conclusion, the smart one would bring them all back, save for one girl, who would be happier there and remain in the other world. I’m now afraid to continue in this vein, for fear it would be wasted if I couldn’t share the story.
So TLDR - From what I can tell, I think the main problem is that the that the girl is kissed and then appears to die (she doesn’t), and this was triggered as snuff?
I am looking for advice from lovers of or writers of erotic horror fiction - how do you work in line with Literotica’s Ts and Cs in regards to states that may resemble death, or leaving the “mortal plane”? Lol Or when dealing with ghosts, spirits and otherworldly creatures fucking?
I’ve never written this kind of thing before and have fallen fowl of the rules. I certainly don’t want to write death porn, or whatever the fuck “vore” is (unsure if I should even Google it).
Thank you for your time and I apologise for the ramble!