happy_bloke
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- Joined
- Mar 3, 2006
- Posts
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I have posted a number of reasonably well received stories, but every time I re-read one I find a couple or more mistakes. I know that I really should get someone to proof read them first. I have approached editors from the lists but they have never replied, or don't reply once I send them drafts.
So I am looking for a reader who will be reasonably prompt in providing checking. I am not in need of story ideas, although would be interested in comments on character development. Motivation of my characters is important. Ideally I am looking for a woman who could also help tailor my stories to a more balanced audience, perhaps give me some insight into what women find erotic.
There are a couple of things my characters did that I regret now. Which is funny really.
You can check out my current stories here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=650345&page=submissions
I am currently writing part five of an exhibitionist and voyeur story, which is what I normally write.
Message me if you are interested.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=650345&page=contact
Thanks
NB
So I am looking for a reader who will be reasonably prompt in providing checking. I am not in need of story ideas, although would be interested in comments on character development. Motivation of my characters is important. Ideally I am looking for a woman who could also help tailor my stories to a more balanced audience, perhaps give me some insight into what women find erotic.
There are a couple of things my characters did that I regret now. Which is funny really.
You can check out my current stories here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=650345&page=submissions
I am currently writing part five of an exhibitionist and voyeur story, which is what I normally write.
Message me if you are interested.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=650345&page=contact
Thanks
NB