Vielle
Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 31, 2008
- Posts
- 79
I've only posted two stories so far. I wouldn't mind if someone wanted to look over my next story before I post. The story has a sister-brother theme. 
A family reunion at Aunt Lana's, the nudist (oh gawd, what a campy cliche ). It's pretty short, 6700 words. It was going to be the first part of several, but now, I'm not sure.
Usually i write stories from beginning to end. This one, I started in the middle, then wrote the beginning and end later. I guess I lost interest halfway through writing it, but felt compelled to finish anyway. I wonder if anyone else does that?
So, it probably needs grammatical surgery. I also wouldn't mind some feedback on characters and plot. Once I get bored with a story, the characters tend to lose their third dimension. I keep getting distracted by cats. They're jealous of the computer and like to slink across my keyboard.
A family reunion at Aunt Lana's, the nudist (oh gawd, what a campy cliche ). It's pretty short, 6700 words. It was going to be the first part of several, but now, I'm not sure.Usually i write stories from beginning to end. This one, I started in the middle, then wrote the beginning and end later. I guess I lost interest halfway through writing it, but felt compelled to finish anyway. I wonder if anyone else does that?
So, it probably needs grammatical surgery. I also wouldn't mind some feedback on characters and plot. Once I get bored with a story, the characters tend to lose their third dimension. I keep getting distracted by cats. They're jealous of the computer and like to slink across my keyboard.
