Looking for a hand

[nakedskin2000]

And no not that type of hand, people. lol. I have a couple of stories going that I am currently stuck on which direction to go. I am hoping someone will step up and help me get these tales moving again.

The first story involved a woman that is spied on masturbating by her mother's boyfriend and subsequently gets even with him. This is where I am stuck. During that episode she is once again spied on and I can't seem to decide by whom, either her brother or her brother's bitchy girlfriend.

The second story is a tale of a woman who is taken against her will to the sex dungeon of her current boyfriend who has become angry about their long distance relationship and jealous of her many admirers.

Any suggestions?

 

[silverwhisper]

it would be helpful if you had some endpoint in mind for both stories, at least some sense of where they conclude. ?

ed

 

[hotsnatch6]

And no not that type of hand, people. lol. I have a couple of stories going that I am currently stuck on which direction to go. I am hoping someone will step up and help me get these tales moving again.

The first story involved a woman that is spied on masturbating by her mother's boyfriend and subsequently gets even with him. This is where I am stuck. During that episode she is once again spied on and I can't seem to decide by whom, either her brother or her brother's bitchy girlfriend.

The second story is a tale of a woman who is taken against her will to the sex dungeon of her current boyfriend who has become angry about their long distance relationship and jealous of her many admirers.

Any suggestions?

In the second story, when she's taken to the dungeon she could get double donged by the boyfriend and one of his buddies. Or the boyfriend could invite some well hung stud over to butt fuck her while he watched and enjoyed the show. Or he could have over a couple of hotties who go to town on each other and then do the boyfriend while she watches.

 

[nakedskin2000]

Thanks for the tip. The endpoint in both stories is obviously sex. In the first I was thinking either some sort of threesome, but no incest, or just lesbian and in the second I was leaning towards some sort of group thing.

 

[Carnevil9]

In the first story, I'd go with the bitchy girlfriend doing the spying. She already "got even with" a guy, so now we get some variety with her having to deal with a girl. Just a thought!......Carney

 

[Black_Dahlia]

The first story involved a woman that is spied on masturbating by her mother's boyfriend and subsequently gets even with him. This is where I am stuck. During that episode she is once again spied on and I can't seem to decide by whom, either her brother or her brother's bitchy girlfriend.

If she's caught a second time, she's either stupid, unlucky or she wants to get caught. I prefer the latter. Maybe she was more turned on at getting caught the first time than she realised, and wants a repeat. The second guy could be her brother's friend or her mum's boss maybe, or an older neighbour.

 

[zex95966]

I agree with most others on their viewpoint of the first story. I like it more if it's the bitchy girlfriend not only for variety but also to appeal to a larger audience since many aren't into the brother thing. (unless that is the type of story your writing.) I also agree that it is more realistic to think that she wants to be caught if it was done a second time.

in the second story I like the idea of making her watch as he gets together with other girls, it fits the revenge more nicely.

 

[nakedskin2000]

Zex,

That is an interesting twist on the second story, the revenge factor. I am leaning towards an encounter with the gf in the first but I'm having trouble on how to get it rolling. Thanks for the input everyone.

 

[HornyHenry]

And no not that type of hand, people. lol. I have a couple of stories going that I am currently stuck on which direction to go. I am hoping someone will step up and help me get these tales moving again.

The first story involved a woman that is spied on masturbating by her mother's boyfriend and subsequently gets even with him. This is where I am stuck. During that episode she is once again spied on and I can't seem to decide by whom, either her brother or her brother's bitchy girlfriend.

The second story is a tale of a woman who is taken against her will to the sex dungeon of her current boyfriend who has become angry about their long distance relationship and jealous of her many admirers.

Any suggestions?

First story: How does she "Get even" with HIM for catching her masturbating? It's her fault, not his. Or does she think it was wrong for him to stand there and look without making himself known?
What does she make him do, and why? So she won't tell her mother that her BF was checking out her daughter? OK, does she make HIM wang off for her? Or maybe have sex with her if she's a horny tart? There should be some sex if someone is going to catch THEM in the "get even" thing.
Why a "Bitchy" brother's girlfriend? That doesn't sound fun. So the brother catches her, and it turns into an incest story, OK?

I like the thought of mutual masturbation - see my "Big Vs. Biggest" story for a type of this for inspiration if you want . It came from a suggestion here.
Cheers and good luck.
HH

 

[nakedskin2000]

help still needed

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