Looking For A Good Editor

[UncleGuido1066]

I am currently working on a series and after posting the first part it has been brought to my attention that I am in desperate need of an editor. A lot of my errors were just because I was in a hurry to post the story to see what kind of response I would get, but a lot weren't. I have done a revision on the first part fixing some of the obvious errors and adding more to the story for characterization. Part one is light incest between two cousins and I am not sure where it is going to go from there, other than at least a couple more interactions between the two cousins. I would be grateful for any assistance that anyone can give to me.

Guido

 

[AnnieLit]

Since you already have the first installment published, post a link here, so people can take a look.

 

[UncleGuido1066]

https://literotica.com/s/the-accident-22

That is the first part that I published, and I'll admit that it is a dumpster fire of errors. Any feedback on it is of course appreciated, but I would truly appreciate anyone that can look over the revised version of the story.