UnpublishedEroticaWriter
Overactive Sloth
- Joined
- Aug 6, 2020
- Posts
- 204
What previous editors have written:
The Devil is in the Details Story
This is a fantastic story! Your symbolism and erotic delight really shines in this story. The succubus was overconfident, and although it was clear from this fact alone she was about to be outdone, there was no indication of how that might happen.
The erotic parts were hot as hell -lol- and the humor and banter between the two characters was fun to read.
The Devil is in the Details Story
This is a fantastic story! Your symbolism and erotic delight really shines in this story. The succubus was overconfident, and although it was clear from this fact alone she was about to be outdone, there was no indication of how that might happen.
The erotic parts were hot as hell -lol- and the humor and banter between the two characters was fun to read.