Looking for a female point of view

Bealzabozo

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I recently wrote a story from a woman's perspective and I would like any interested female readers to look at it and give me their opinions. I wonder if I gave the fairer sex the credit it's due and if the thoughts and feelings of my character are realistic. PM me if interested. Thank you
 
I recently wrote a story from a woman's perspective and I would like any interested female readers to look at it and give me their opinions. I wonder if I gave the fairer sex the credit it's due and if the thoughts and feelings of my character are realistic. PM me if interested. Thank you

Please send me a PM ...
 
If you're a guy, I'd be willing to bet you got it wrong. Could we get a link?
 
I'd be happy to take a look

Not all women have the same mindset. I'd be happy to read it.
 
Is this a published story (with link) or are you seeking a beta reader/editor?
 
If you're a guy, I'd be willing to bet you got it wrong. Could we get a link?
You're too dismissive. This comment from a female reader of one of my stories:
I stumbled on this story in a very roundabout way, so knew absolutely nothing about the author. Was really surprised to find out it was written by a man, I was 150% sure it was a female writing.
 
I wrote two from a female point of view this is one of them

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-soldiers-wife-1

I honestly didn’t do all that much different except she is a little less psychotic than most of my male characters

People are all different although there are some commonalities among the genders for the most part I think trying to hard to get a gender right can screw it up. Just put yourself in your characters place and write like they would think
 
I like to think when I write from a female perspective in my stories I do an ok job. Would love to hear some feedback as well. Its a lot of reading though. :)
 
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