rthnck
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I have a female POV short story (1820 words). Probably goes in Erotic Coupling. I am interested in any and all criticisms and comments about the story and any polishing recommendations. As I am just imagining how things feel for the woman, I think I need the female POV to improve it. The story concentrates on fingering and dildos. Thanks in advance to anyone that wants to take a look.
