squirrelzo
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Oct 13, 2012
- Posts
- 178
Hello. Not a first time author on lit but first time I would like an editor. I dont think you will find basic English a problem. Would just love some perspective on the story. Its your basic EC premise. Man & woman both have a kind of haunted past. Get stuck in a hotel. They fuck and talk. Lots of sex but lots of emotional interaction. Does it work? Is it hot? How can I improve? If this is your thing, please PM.