BelleCanzuto
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Hello all -
I've just finished my first NonCon story. Another author has helped me get over a sticking point (thanks Russ!), but I'd like someone to look at the whole thing fresh, i.e. not knowing how it originally ended.
As I said, it's a NonCon story, a roughly 42.5K words. The premise is that a civillian woman in a country that just lost a war is given to a general from the conquering country as his reward. There are a lot of BDSM elements (i.e. - some bondage, and that the woman was previously in a D/s relationship, which is referenced in flashbacks).
If that sounds like something you'd be willing to read and give me some feedback on, just send me a PM.
thanks
Belle
eta: I know that's a long story to ask for feedback on. I'm planning to submit in three chapeters, and would be happy to send it to a reader the same way. I'm also not on any kind of deadline to publish it, so there's no rush for the review.
thanks again, Belle
I've just finished my first NonCon story. Another author has helped me get over a sticking point (thanks Russ!), but I'd like someone to look at the whole thing fresh, i.e. not knowing how it originally ended.
As I said, it's a NonCon story, a roughly 42.5K words. The premise is that a civillian woman in a country that just lost a war is given to a general from the conquering country as his reward. There are a lot of BDSM elements (i.e. - some bondage, and that the woman was previously in a D/s relationship, which is referenced in flashbacks).
If that sounds like something you'd be willing to read and give me some feedback on, just send me a PM.
thanks
Belle
eta: I know that's a long story to ask for feedback on. I'm planning to submit in three chapeters, and would be happy to send it to a reader the same way. I'm also not on any kind of deadline to publish it, so there's no rush for the review.
thanks again, Belle
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