jsmiam
Literotica Whisperer
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Hi beta readers,
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EDIT- thanks, a wonderful volunteer editor from the board helped me tremendously!! Thanks!! (No further help needed) END OF EDIT
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I'm hoping someone might be in the mood for a quick-ish beta-reading/proof-reading. My story is complete, and although I'll reread it endlessly, I've already re-read it three times, so it's close enough to benefiting from an extra set of eyes. Ideally, an eagle eyed proof reader with an e-red pen, who will also notice things like forgetting which girl I'm with and using the wrong name. (They HATE when I do that! ha ha)
It's 9800 words, and although it could use one more scene, I'm probably not going to do that, writer's fatigue has set in.
It's in Microsoft Word Online (anyone can edit, they don't even need MS word on their computer), but I can email it too. (I'm super careful about leaving traces on my computer, that's why it's in Word Online. If you're too good of an editor, you would probably want to use track changes and the like, but Word online doesn't play too well with that.
It's a story from a male perspective, who of course, fulfills his every-males fantasy of multiple women, with a little group sex, bisexual female, anal, oral, and even a dash of romance. It's for the Summer Lovin' contest.
Based on past stories, it's likely (I hope) going to be a red H story, optimistically up into the 4.7s. My goal in life is to hit 4.8 (and stay there), which has eluded me so far. Maybe a story without my usual little mistakes could get me there?
Thanks in advance. PM me. I'll try to reply quickly. Since I'm just looking for a beta reader and not a full edit, it's quite possible you'd be done very quickly. I'd like to submit it early this upcoming week.
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EDIT- thanks, a wonderful volunteer editor from the board helped me tremendously!! Thanks!! (No further help needed) END OF EDIT
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I'm hoping someone might be in the mood for a quick-ish beta-reading/proof-reading. My story is complete, and although I'll reread it endlessly, I've already re-read it three times, so it's close enough to benefiting from an extra set of eyes. Ideally, an eagle eyed proof reader with an e-red pen, who will also notice things like forgetting which girl I'm with and using the wrong name. (They HATE when I do that! ha ha)
It's 9800 words, and although it could use one more scene, I'm probably not going to do that, writer's fatigue has set in.
It's in Microsoft Word Online (anyone can edit, they don't even need MS word on their computer), but I can email it too. (I'm super careful about leaving traces on my computer, that's why it's in Word Online. If you're too good of an editor, you would probably want to use track changes and the like, but Word online doesn't play too well with that.
It's a story from a male perspective, who of course, fulfills his every-males fantasy of multiple women, with a little group sex, bisexual female, anal, oral, and even a dash of romance. It's for the Summer Lovin' contest.
Based on past stories, it's likely (I hope) going to be a red H story, optimistically up into the 4.7s. My goal in life is to hit 4.8 (and stay there), which has eluded me so far. Maybe a story without my usual little mistakes could get me there?
Thanks in advance. PM me. I'll try to reply quickly. Since I'm just looking for a beta reader and not a full edit, it's quite possible you'd be done very quickly. I'd like to submit it early this upcoming week.
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