Locksmith

[Chicklet]

Okay, so we have a locksmith who likes to make himself keys to the homes of clients. One day he slips into a house and is looking through their personal belongings (he isn't looking at anything nasty, really, just getting off on being there and having free reign of their stuff) when the couple comes home. He hides in the closet and tries to stay quiet until they leave.

many possibilities.

he could watch/hear them have sex

he could be discovered

what else?

Chicklet

 

[jakelyon]

A Woman?

How about if the locksmith was a woman? That would add some twists:

Maybe the man could "punish" her if she is discovered.

She could join in their sex.

She could watch and see that the woman doesn't really enjoy the sex, and come back later for a lesbian encounter.

Maybe she could become infatuated with the husband as he does such good job screwing his wife that she has to have him. How would she set it up so the husband would fuck her?

Cool idea.

 

[peterpan]

They extort him into building a dungeon for them? (and I think this tale would be much improved by making them a lesbian couple )

 

[Chicklet]

would a lesbian couple be interested in a male locksmith?

 

[BlackSnake]

would a lesbian couple be interested in a male locksmith?

Maybe, if they were looking to have a child naturaly, or wanting to experiment, but not to his pleasure.

 

[peterpan]

would a lesbian couple be interested in a male locksmith?

What! Damn! I hadn't thought of that! Why do you have to be so cruel!


Still, in terms of locksmithing jobs, I think that would probably make it to my top ten.

 

[sirhugs]

would a lesbian couple be interested in a male locksmith?

maybe they are lez as a couple, but bi when they can share the right guy!

 

[Chicklet]

okay so does the female locksmith discovered by the couple do it for ya? turn it into a bdsm or nonconsent story and do we have a winner or no?

Chicklet

 

[sirhugs]

As written by Chicklet I'm sure it would be great!

 

[peterpan]

Hey Chicklet,

What was the original motivation for this tale anyway? From context I am guessing someone made a request to you for a tale with a locksmith in it? Or is it continuing another thread?

I think the job that she was asked to do is important. Perhaps not as obvious as a dungeon, but it might also relate to why she was curious enough to sneak back in.

 

[peterpan]

Oh,

How about this:

locksmith (could be male but I am assuming female) guesses that there is something interesting hidden in the basement. For reasons fair or foul she sneaks in to have a look.

She discovers a dungeon with a girl whom has obviously lived all her life there as a sex slave. The locksmith is caught there and also imprisoned.

The tale is mainly about the relationship between the two prisoners. The locksmith is chained up, so that she needs the girl to look after her. The girl has never learnt to speak, and doesn't know anything about right and wrong, but is still basically sweet.

The girl treats the locksmith sort of like a pet, and maybe does things to her that she has been trained to do to her master. (thats where the NC comes in, but still strangely sort of sweet)

Anyway, eventually the Locksmith rescues the girl and they live happily ever after.

 

[Chicklet]

What was the original motivation for this tale anyway? From context I am guessing someone made a request to you for a tale with a locksmith in it? Or is it continuing another thread?

sirhugs made a comment about putting some of my ideas from my "finish some day" folder up here, so, i went and grabbed one. this happened to be it. I thought of this idea at work one day and jotted it down on a napkin.

Chicklet

 

[Chicklet]

She discovers a dungeon with a girl whom has obviously lived all her life there as a sex slave. The locksmith is caught there and also imprisoned.

this is interesting but I don't think I could write it because it seems wrong...all her life? unable to speak? sad, isn't it? also sorta reminds me of planet of the apes wink wink.

good idea, but not for me.

Chicklet

 

[peterpan]

fair enough reason.. I was thinking more 'Nell'

Personally I get depressed by all those tales with bouant, happy and well adjusted girls about 1000th of a second after their eighteenth birthday meeting what ever obnoxious fate the author has dreamt up for the rest of their lives

umm, just want to clarify that it was meant to be a sad-starting story with a happy ending, not a whole lot of nastyness done on screen for titilation as it were.... I mean, just in case you were just being polite while reaching for a big rock...

 

[jakelyon]

Story Started

If anyone has an interest I started a Chyoo story about a locksmith. Here is a link

AAA Locksmith


If you like that idea add to it.

 

[Guest]

This should be like this: Locksmith is a hot guy who is hired to open a door to the house for a couple. The wife in the couple will really like the guy and she will call him again a couple of days later to open the bedroom that has locked. He opens it and there will be her sex toy that she put there to give him crazy thoughts. He becomes horny and something might happen? Maybe she tells him to make extra key for himself so that he can sneak in to her later when husband is at work?

Let's face it there isn't that many female locksmiths out there.

 

[MightyZor]

sorry, my name is MightyZor, not MightyYur, that was a mistake I made