Little story I wrote, could I get your reactions?

[Saiyaman]

This is a story meant for an erotic comic which I never finished. It was meant to be a prequel to my "I trust you?" comic.

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[girlatheart]

I really liked your story and connected with her. The title is what really seals the deal for me and gives it that deeper meaning. It begs the reader to want to finish the sentence themselves based on how they connected to the story. Very good. Loved it!

Kim