lit experience poem

[DiscoLarlie]

This is a poem I wrote awhile ago about my lit experience and how it's really hard not to slip into a routine.

Late nights, long hours. Hard
like your cock. Words gush,
falling out of my lips (bite)
and this is who I am.
Now

Time and time again
you have one new message
and yes, I’ll navigate to it
Swinging my hips (that get in the way.)
You seem different.
Baby, you sound so hot

and one day,
I’ll look back on this
and smile, blush (die.)
Because I’m not
supposed to be a girl like this.
Whoever I am

 

[Angeline]

This is a poem I wrote awhile ago about my lit experience and how it's really hard not to slip into a routine.

Late nights, long hours. Hard
like your cock. Words gush,
falling out of my lips (bite)
and this is who I am.
Now

Time and time again
you have one new message
and yes, I’ll navigate to it
Swinging my hips (that get in the way.)
You seem different.
Baby, you sound so hot

and one day,
I’ll look back on this
and smile, blush (die.)
Because I’m not
supposed to be a girl like this.
Whoever I am

Welcome to the poetry forum. I like your poem.

 

[Palba_Noruda]

Good topic. It's an interesting place.

I like the third part the best.

 

[annaswirls]

hard as it is to not slip into a routine it is a thousand times harder to break your way out

I like your use of asides (this) it works, kind of like a peek into your internal dialogue.

I think this poem would work best if you take the last line and turn it into your title. It plants a seed that re-emerges at the end. Just a thought.

Welcome to the forum, you are in good company.

This is a poem I wrote awhile ago about my lit experience and how it's really hard not to slip into a routine.

Late nights, long hours. Hard
like your cock. Words gush,
falling out of my lips (bite)
and this is who I am.
Now

Time and time again
you have one new message
and yes, I’ll navigate to it
Swinging my hips (that get in the way.)
You seem different.
Baby, you sound so hot

and one day,
I’ll look back on this
and smile, blush (die.)
Because I’m not
supposed to be a girl like this.
Whoever I am

 

[DiscoLarlie]

hard as it is to not slip into a routine it is a thousand times harder to break your way out

I like your use of asides (this) it works, kind of like a peek into your internal dialogue.

I think this poem would work best if you take the last line and turn it into your title. It plants a seed that re-emerges at the end. Just a thought.

Welcome to the forum, you are in good company.

thank you! it's good to be here.
I always forget to tittle stuff, but that sounds good!

 

[nerk]

wonderful wonderful

Baby, you sound so hot!

and this captures that little dilemma of 'who is this person i become online?' beautifully

This is a poem I wrote awhile ago about my lit experience and how it's really hard not to slip into a routine.

Late nights, long hours. Hard
like your cock. Words gush,
falling out of my lips (bite)
and this is who I am.
Now

Time and time again
you have one new message
and yes, I’ll navigate to it
Swinging my hips (that get in the way.)
You seem different.
Baby, you sound so hot

and one day,
I’ll look back on this
and smile, blush (die.)
Because I’m not
supposed to be a girl like this.
Whoever I am

 

[hurry234]

Good topic. It's an interesting place.

I like the third part the best.
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[darkerdreamer]

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[SweetOblivion]

Not sure about the "baby you are so hot"

unless meant ironically, but the rest of your effort is a worthy addition - all power to your pen - I look forward to reading more of you in time. Sweet O.

 

[nerk]

Not sure about the "baby you are so hot"
unless meant ironically, but the rest of your effort is a worthy addition - all power to your pen - I look forward to reading more of you in time. Sweet O.

Time and time again
you have one new message...


You seem different
Baby, you sound so hot

I believe the last two lines of the stanza are the text of the messages she mentions receiving in the first two lines, and are read in implied "quotes"