Lingerie party?

[Deadygirl]

Hi everyone. I've been reading and listening to stories here on Lit for 3-4 years now and over the last few months I've had the urge to write a story of my own. It's based loosely on my own experience with everything brought up to legal age, of course.

The story goes something like this. A very open family, mom, dad, older brother, and 18 y.o. daughter about to graduate high-school. Different degrees of incestuous relationships within the family. Mom decides to throw a lingerie party/sleepover for the daughter and some of her closet girl friends. Mother's buys different lingerie outfits, sex toys, etc as "door prizes" for drawings throughout the party. Adult games, porn movies, experimenting, hooking up, etc. Dad is tucked away in the master bedroom upstairs leaving the house to the girls and giving them privacy, older brother is at the lake with friends for the weekend. Mom ends up horny, slips in with dad to fuck, girls peek and some join in, etc. Possibly brother ends up coming home, etc, etc.

So, is this something you think would be well recieved? Any ideas or suggestions? I'm excited to hear anything you have to say. Thanks!

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's a very male fantasy and that's not bad. But it's not very realistic. Assuming the family is incestuous, it stands to reason that they are not the norm. So daughters friends would completely oblivious to what goes down at the Smith residence.
So instead of a lingerie party it's a post grad pool party. Very common, realistic and no need to suspend disbelief.

Let the party descend into debauchery. Mom is there and dad is upstairs, like you said. The girls are all in the living room as one by one they shower after swimming. The subject turns to sex and at some point one girl mentions a recent porn she watched with a well hung fella featured. So they watch it on the big screen.

Then one girl notices Mrs. Smith sneak away and follows her, witnessing through an unclosed door how dad is built. She goes back downstairs and points at the TV. "That guy, is nothing. You should check out Mr. Smith right now. He's upstairs plowing Mrs. Smith."

The daughter nods her head. "Yep, dad is a beast. Follow me, I'll show you guys a place to see them well." She takes them outside to a spot where they can see in a window that doesn't face a neighbors house, so they never bother to close the blinds.

The girls get wildly horny and then the sex toys come out, and the brother comes home with his best friend. An hour later mom comes down to an orgy in the living room. Then the elder Smiths are invited to join in.

 

[Deadygirl]

The reason I am working on the story is because it happened to me. My family is very open and my closet friends know about my family's lifestyle and my participation. I can definitely see where you're coming from because it is something that most people would consider absurd, especially with a minor child involved.

I definitely like some of your ideas. I can see some of them weaving into the story.

 

[LisaMayTurner]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

 

[atariblue]

It's erotica. It's a work of fiction. It doesn't need to be realistic. If it's based off of actual events readers don't need to know that. I don't read stories on Lit for the realism. I read it for the steamy smut. So let go of any inhibitions about nailing the real life details and just have fun writing the story that makes you happy.

That being said Rob_Royale has good story notes.

 

[atariblue]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

And a chase scene with Yakkity Sax playing ala Benny Hill

 

[OralDave]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

Silent movie?

 

[Reenigam]

It doesn't need to be realistic

IF YOU ONLY

read it for the steamy smut.

... but those of us who like to read an actual story need more.

 

[Mittering]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

I'm sensing Benny Hill vibes. I like it.

 

[Mittering]

Hi everyone. I've been reading and listening to stories here on Lit for 3-4 years now and over the last few months I've had the urge to write a story of my own. It's based loosely on my own experience with everything brought up to legal age, of course.

The story goes something like this. A very open family, mom, dad, older brother, and 18 y.o. daughter about to graduate high-school. Different degrees of incestuous relationships within the family. Mom decides to throw a lingerie party/sleepover for the daughter and some of her closet girl friends. Mother's buys different lingerie outfits, sex toys, etc as "door prizes" for drawings throughout the party. Adult games, porn movies, experimenting, hooking up, etc. Dad is tucked away in the master bedroom upstairs leaving the house to the girls and giving them privacy, older brother is at the lake with friends for the weekend. Mom ends up horny, slips in with dad to fuck, girls peek and some join in, etc. Possibly brother ends up coming home, etc, etc.

So, is this something you think would be well recieved? Any ideas or suggestions? I'm excited to hear anything you have to say. Thanks!

I like your story idea and I read that is was more of a true story and I'm sure you wanted to stay true to events where you could as well as stay true to the fantasy you have running amok in your head.

Lots to work with and still keep it original. You might want to offer your collaboration to whoever takes up the reins and puts a pen to it.

 

[Deadygirl]

I like your story idea and I read that is was more of a true story and I'm sure you wanted to stay true to events where you could as well as stay true to the fantasy you have running amok in your head.

Lots to work with and still keep it original. You might want to offer your collaboration to whoever takes up the reins and puts a pen to it.

Thanks.. I'm going to give it a whirl!

 

[AWonkyDonkey]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

That gave me the biggest giggle I've had all week. When reading that, I also imagined the Benny Hill music playing over the top.

 

[beliefofmine]

Thanks.. I'm going to give it a whirl!

I'm a firm believer that if you want to write about something you should, regardless of how you think it shall be received. People find and search out stories they want to read, so you'll always find an audience.

I'd be interested whenever you finish. Sound right up my alley.

 

[Durken82]

Thanks.. I'm going to give it a whirl!

Report back when you finish this!