Lingerie party?

[Deadygirl]

Hi everyone. I've been reading and listening to stories here on Lit for 3-4 years now and over the last few months I've had the urge to write a story of my own. It's based loosely on my own experience with everything brought up to legal age, of course.

The story goes something like this. A very open family, mom, dad, older brother, and 18 y.o. daughter about to graduate high-school. Different degrees of incestuous relationships within the family. Mom decides to throw a lingerie party/sleepover for the daughter and some of her closet girl friends. Mother's buys different lingerie outfits, sex toys, etc as "door prizes" for drawings throughout the party. Adult games, porn movies, experimenting, hooking up, etc. Dad is tucked away in the master bedroom upstairs leaving the house to the girls and giving them privacy, older brother is at the lake with friends for the weekend. Mom ends up horny, slips in with dad to fuck, girls peek and some join in, etc. Possibly brother ends up coming home, etc, etc.

So, is this something you think would be well recieved? Any ideas or suggestions? I'm excited to hear anything you have to say. Thanks!

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's a very male fantasy and that's not bad. But it's not very realistic. Assuming the family is incestuous, it stands to reason that they are not the norm. So daughters friends would completely oblivious to what goes down at the Smith residence.
So instead of a lingerie party it's a post grad pool party. Very common, realistic and no need to suspend disbelief.

Let the party descend into debauchery. Mom is there and dad is upstairs, like you said. The girls are all in the living room as one by one they shower after swimming. The subject turns to sex and at some point one girl mentions a recent porn she watched with a well hung fella featured. So they watch it on the big screen.

Then one girl notices Mrs. Smith sneak away and follows her, witnessing through an unclosed door how dad is built. She goes back downstairs and points at the TV. "That guy, is nothing. You should check out Mr. Smith right now. He's upstairs plowing Mrs. Smith."

The daughter nods her head. "Yep, dad is a beast. Follow me, I'll show you guys a place to see them well." She takes them outside to a spot where they can see in a window that doesn't face a neighbors house, so they never bother to close the blinds.

The girls get wildly horny and then the sex toys come out, and the brother comes home with his best friend. An hour later mom comes down to an orgy in the living room. Then the elder Smiths are invited to join in.

 

[Deadygirl]

The reason I am working on the story is because it happened to me. My family is very open and my closet friends know about my family's lifestyle and my participation. I can definitely see where you're coming from because it is something that most people would consider absurd, especially with a minor child involved.

I definitely like some of your ideas. I can see some of them weaving into the story.

 

[LisaMayTurner]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

 

[atariblue]

It's erotica. It's a work of fiction. It doesn't need to be realistic. If it's based off of actual events readers don't need to know that. I don't read stories on Lit for the realism. I read it for the steamy smut. So let go of any inhibitions about nailing the real life details and just have fun writing the story that makes you happy.

That being said Rob_Royale has good story notes.

 

[atariblue]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

And a chase scene with Yakkity Sax playing ala Benny Hill

 

[OralDave]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

Silent movie?

 

[Reenigam]

It doesn't need to be realistic

IF YOU ONLY

read it for the steamy smut.

... but those of us who like to read an actual story need more.

 

[Mittering]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

I'm sensing Benny Hill vibes. I like it.

 

[Mittering]

Hi everyone. I've been reading and listening to stories here on Lit for 3-4 years now and over the last few months I've had the urge to write a story of my own. It's based loosely on my own experience with everything brought up to legal age, of course.

The story goes something like this. A very open family, mom, dad, older brother, and 18 y.o. daughter about to graduate high-school. Different degrees of incestuous relationships within the family. Mom decides to throw a lingerie party/sleepover for the daughter and some of her closet girl friends. Mother's buys different lingerie outfits, sex toys, etc as "door prizes" for drawings throughout the party. Adult games, porn movies, experimenting, hooking up, etc. Dad is tucked away in the master bedroom upstairs leaving the house to the girls and giving them privacy, older brother is at the lake with friends for the weekend. Mom ends up horny, slips in with dad to fuck, girls peek and some join in, etc. Possibly brother ends up coming home, etc, etc.

So, is this something you think would be well recieved? Any ideas or suggestions? I'm excited to hear anything you have to say. Thanks!

I like your story idea and I read that is was more of a true story and I'm sure you wanted to stay true to events where you could as well as stay true to the fantasy you have running amok in your head.

Lots to work with and still keep it original. You might want to offer your collaboration to whoever takes up the reins and puts a pen to it.

 

[Deadygirl]

I like your story idea and I read that is was more of a true story and I'm sure you wanted to stay true to events where you could as well as stay true to the fantasy you have running amok in your head.

Lots to work with and still keep it original. You might want to offer your collaboration to whoever takes up the reins and puts a pen to it.

Thanks.. I'm going to give it a whirl!

 

[AWonkyDonkey]

Don't forget a custard pie fight before all their trousers fall off and the police arrive for a jolly good chase around with their truncheons out and waggling about.

That gave me the biggest giggle I've had all week. When reading that, I also imagined the Benny Hill music playing over the top.

 

[beliefofmine]

Thanks.. I'm going to give it a whirl!

I'm a firm believer that if you want to write about something you should, regardless of how you think it shall be received. People find and search out stories they want to read, so you'll always find an audience.

I'd be interested whenever you finish. Sound right up my alley.

 

[Durken82]

Thanks.. I'm going to give it a whirl!

Report back when you finish this!

 

[KindredFlame]

I would try to keep,it within the women but it can be very difficult. Good luck

 

[Durken82]

Hi everyone. I've been reading and listening to stories here on Lit for 3-4 years now and over the last few months I've had the urge to write a story of my own. It's based loosely on my own experience with everything brought up to legal age, of course.

The story goes something like this. A very open family, mom, dad, older brother, and 18 y.o. daughter about to graduate high-school. Different degrees of incestuous relationships within the family. Mom decides to throw a lingerie party/sleepover for the daughter and some of her closet girl friends. Mother's buys different lingerie outfits, sex toys, etc as "door prizes" for drawings throughout the party. Adult games, porn movies, experimenting, hooking up, etc. Dad is tucked away in the master bedroom upstairs leaving the house to the girls and giving them privacy, older brother is at the lake with friends for the weekend. Mom ends up horny, slips in with dad to fuck, girls peek and some join in, etc. Possibly brother ends up coming home, etc, etc.

So, is this something you think would be well recieved? Any ideas or suggestions? I'm excited to hear anything you have to say. Thanks!

This is a great idea. Did you write it yet?

 

[KindredFlame]

I was wondering the same thing

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

I think the original idea is already very good. I see two competing threads. Mom throwing a lingerie party for daughter and friends, that goes overboard. And secondly the incestuous relationships, which means mom and daughter had sex with father and and son brother.
I don't see a problem, that daughter's friends are unaware of the incestuous relationships. It can be revealed in due time.
Mom also providing toys and porn is a bit over the top for my taste. Less might be more. You only need to navigate them from lingerie to making out in some way, but I think that can be done. Maybe mother and daughter push it in that direction, as they have been intimate before. Careful with age restrictions though. Implying that there has been family sex before her 18th birthday will prevent publication.
Then I could imagine the father and brother to be called in to act as judges when all girls are in their skimpiest clothes and already making out. Maybe one girl really wants to win and starts stripping for the brother. Another for the father. And then even mother and daughter. It goes on with girls starting to seduce father and brother. Only during the act the friends realize, mother and daughter have joined in, but mother is making out with son and daughter with father.

 

[Pabiporffor]

I dipped my toes into the whole lingerie/morally flexible family thing years ago with https://www.literotica.com/s/nighties-of-the-round-table

Very simple premise, girls put on nighties, bend over a table under a blanket to hide their identity and take a fucking from friends and family. Despite lacking much of a storyline it did well it the ratings and views. Readers don't always want realism or Shakespeare, often they just want something quick that'll make them smile.

Just wished I'd included a guy in a gorilla suit now.

 

[Durken82]

I dipped my toes into the whole lingerie/morally flexible family thing years ago with https://www.literotica.com/s/nighties-of-the-round-table

Very simple premise, girls put on nighties, bend over a table under a blanket to hide their identity and take a fucking from friends and family. Despite lacking much of a storyline it did well it the ratings and views. Readers don't always want realism or Shakespeare, often they just want something quick that'll make them smile.

Just wished I'd included a guy in a gorilla suit now.

I'm going to check this story out. I like the premise. Is there anything similar? Maybe glory hole / blind blow jobs?

 

[KindredFlame]

I have been looking at this and trying to work out the scenario. Talking about lingerie to me is a bit like talking to a farmer about building a skyscraper but my wife has some lovely and expensive lingerie and I have come to the conclusion that the less there is the more expensive the item is.

I am a bit of a Slogi knickers kind of girl but I have been known to wear a g-string or a thong if I have to. The idea of a mother putting on an event such as this eludes me but I guess it’s not impossible. All I can say is good luck with it.

 

[bestkeptsecret678]

I'm a firm believer that if you want to write about something you should, regardless of how you think it shall be received. People find and search out stories they want to read, so you'll always find an audience.

I'd be interested whenever you finish. Sound right up my alley.

Readers acceptance of your work is nice, but the real thrill is in creating it.
Just.
Start.

 

[AlinaX]

If mom & daughter have been having a playful relationship since daughter’s eighteenth, with the daughter perhaps fascinated by mom & dad’s collection of sex toys, it could segue into mom buying toys for the graduation party and the daughter telling her friends to bring silly sex toys for a laugh…