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Piscator said:
The Poets Collective will accept tags with number of lines to a poem here is their linik to 11 line poems
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Lyricalli said:
You know how you've heard that nothing is ever really deleted once it's been online? That's not entirely true, but some things do exist in the internet afterlife.

http://web.archive.org/web/20210603171312/http://thepoetsgarret.com/
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Brilliant! Thank you both. :rose:

P'tor I'm a techno-dope. How does one search by tags? That's a trick I need to learn.
 
Lyricalli said:
You know how you've heard that nothing is ever really deleted once it's been online? That's not entirely true, but some things do exist in the internet afterlife.

http://web.archive.org/web/20210603171312/http://thepoetsgarret.com/
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Angeline said:
Brilliant! Thank you both. :rose:

P'tor I'm a techno-dope. How does one search by tags? That's a trick I need to learn.
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Thanks Lyri, it's reassuring to know there is an afterlife - at least on the internet.

Angie -On Poet's Collective Site, just enter desired item into search window - here is a link to 12 lines for those keen to get on with 12 line poems for the August Lineby Line Challenge.
 
Piscator said:
Thanks Lyri, it's reassuring to know there is an afterlife - at least on the internet.

Angie -On Poet's Collective Site, just enter desired item into search window - here is a link to 12 lines for those keen to get on with 12 line poems for the August Lineby Line Challenge.
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Thanks. I always expect this stuff to be more complicated than it is. :rolleyes:

I'll probably get to my 12-line offering (mess) in a week or two. I'm finally having my surgery on the 3rd of August. It took forever to get my insurance sorted. 'Murica. :cool:
 
Angeline said:
Thanks. I always expect this stuff to be more complicated than it is. :rolleyes:

I'll probably get to my 12-line offering (mess) in a week or two. I'm finally having my surgery on the 3rd of August. It took forever to get my insurance sorted. 'Murica. :cool:
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No rush,I hope all goes well with your surgery. I may well be late myself with a family get together and a canoe trip. Great to these happening after the lost year and more with covid.
 
Piscator said:
No rush,I hope all goes well with your surgery. I may well be late myself with a family get together and a canoe trip. Great to these happening after the lost year and more with covid.
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Thank you P'tor. My surgery just got postponed again ( :mad: ). I'm starting to feel cursed! But the good news is I can put my poetry cap back on...once I'm done sulking.

Enjoy your time with your fam and the fishies. :rose:
 
Angeline said:
Thank you P'tor. My surgery just got postponed again ( :mad: ). I'm starting to feel cursed! But the good news is I can put my poetry cap back on...once I'm done sulking.

Enjoy your time with your fam and the fishies. :rose:
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Good luck the next time!
 
Angie, I loved your Basin Street Blues, yet another of your continuing set of jazz poems.

Long ago when Ross Porter was with the CBC and later with Jazz FM91, he had a late night jazz program "Music to Listen to Jazz By," I suggest you might collect them and publish as "Poems to Listen to Jazz By." Or at least post them as a sticky on PFD
 
Piscator said:
Angie, I loved your Basin Street Blues, yet another of your continuing set of jazz poems.

Long ago when Ross Porter was with the CBC and later with Jazz FM91, he had a late night jazz program "Music to Listen to Jazz By," I suggest you might collect them and publish as "Poems to Listen to Jazz By." Or at least post them as a sticky on PFD
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Thank you P'tor. I was reading that Louis was the first to record Basin Street Blues (in 1928), so I had to listen to that and when I did the poem just poured out of me. :)

I may start a thread of my jazz poems, if only to put them all in one place. There are dozens of them going back almost 20 years. :cool:
 
:nana::nana::nana:Welcome to our madness Winter Fare, and PBAnnie too. :nana::nana::nana:

There's always room for more.
 
PBAnnie, your Once In a While is lovely. The rhyme is lilting but unobtrusive and that cornucopia of images is like a movie in my mind's eye! Really enjoyed reading it. :rose:
 
Piscator said:
Angeline's Under Toad Wow!
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PBAnnie said:
Agreed. It's a great commentary of recent events.
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Thank you both. It's a dark poem, for me. I had learned an old friend died suddenly and was processing it.

PBAnnie, we did a challenge here years ago where we each wrote a poem about one of the twelve (or thirteen) moons. I tried to find it to link here without success. It was a good challenge, yielded some terrific poems. I believe it was Champagne's challenge. Maybe she or someone else here remembers it.
 
Unlucky thirteen is over the hump and now is now up to 14 submissions. Again, I am impressed by the creativity, diversity and technical prowess of PFD poets.
 
Guilty Pleasure's new addition to the 11-line challenge here had me transported into a tree with those final lines. kudos! i could really feel this.
 
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