Lilly White, Virgin

[Ticklish Girl]

Just wanted to say that this is probably the most erotic story I've ever read on this site. Miss Kitty and Lilly are great characters. Since one is a madam and the other a virgin, it's natural to expect them to behave in a stereotypical manner, but they rise above their roles and seem very real. The action is unhurried, allowing the reader to savor every erotic moment as the sex scenes build.

I loved this story! I gave it the highest rating, and I hope it rises to the top and stays there.

 

[Silverlily]

I loved this story! I gave it the highest rating, and I hope it rises to the top and stays there.

I completely agree. I was absolutely overcome with the depth and richness if her imagery. The historical details were brilliant. Wow!

 

[Gary1]

Tawny T.,
You have continually written great stories, however, this one is the best to date ... great detail, provocative, sensuous, erotic and sexy. It had everything that I like in a short story ... thanks for your contribution ... gn

 

[Tawny T]

Thanks for the kind words. I love writing and this one just came from nowhere. After those comments, I may have to go back and read it again. Hey, I get off to some of my stories too!

I set it in the Old West, and after I sent it in wondered how man people knew the outcome of the Gunfight. Of course Billy got killed along with another cowhand.

For more info put "Gunfight at OK Corral" into your search engine. I forgot that these literally go around the world and not everyone knows the ending of the gunfight even though it's been on TV, in books, and in movies for years.

I may write a sequel to it. I left the door open for one, didn't I? I am gratified you enjoyed it so much.

 

[ANiceGuy]

Loved Lilly

As a lover of Bi and girl/girl stories I even reread it. I had to go get some more Puffs tissues before it did however!