CopperSkink
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Jul 12, 2009
- Posts
- 462
The continuation of my series can use an extra pair of eyes, about 100k words worth. It deals with a single young man growing up past the college life and thinking of settling down with a wife and a career. Lots and lots of group sex, conflicted morals, a hint of incest, a few high school cheerleaders, and mild swearing. There's the slight chance of consensual sex between consenting male and female adults but I don't want things to get too crazy.
Another series I have in the works, also around 100k words, really needs to get off the ground because it's the first I ever wrote and I'd really like to finish it. Less sex, more drama, fewer life-altering choices, more cheerleaders, less cheerfulness.
I stab most of the normal errors myself on my rereads so I'm not worried about them getting edited. My issue is that these stories all happen in continuous continuity, I don't throw anything away and start over. Every story I write is weighted down with every story that came before it which is of considerable importance when I'm at part five or even part ten of a story. I need someone to make sure things don't get unraveled from one story to the other. No loose ends.
With so much to keep track of, the hardest part for me is finishing any one story or figuring out how one character would react based upon everything that's happened before. My hope is for someone to jump on board and say something like "This entire story is stupid" or "all it needs is one boos in this direction". Almost like a self-lighting match that still needs to be rubbed up against something course.
tl;dr hlp pls
Another series I have in the works, also around 100k words, really needs to get off the ground because it's the first I ever wrote and I'd really like to finish it. Less sex, more drama, fewer life-altering choices, more cheerleaders, less cheerfulness.
I stab most of the normal errors myself on my rereads so I'm not worried about them getting edited. My issue is that these stories all happen in continuous continuity, I don't throw anything away and start over. Every story I write is weighted down with every story that came before it which is of considerable importance when I'm at part five or even part ten of a story. I need someone to make sure things don't get unraveled from one story to the other. No loose ends.
With so much to keep track of, the hardest part for me is finishing any one story or figuring out how one character would react based upon everything that's happened before. My hope is for someone to jump on board and say something like "This entire story is stupid" or "all it needs is one boos in this direction". Almost like a self-lighting match that still needs to be rubbed up against something course.
tl;dr hlp pls
