Lesson for today.

[PrevertOne]

Rejected again.

Okay, so I finally got a response from the moderator. The story's rejected again. Same reason as the first. I will not make another correction so in the future the Hentai World order will go directly from Part Five to Part Seven. Hentai World: Part Six: 'Shrooms can be found on Eka's Portal and Hentai Foundry, without the correction.

 

[Hypoxia]

Okay, so I finally got a response from the moderator. The story's rejected again. Same reason as the first.

Did the persona(s) survive inside the eater? How 'deathless' was your result? I ask in case I ever submit some soft vore.

 

[gordo12]

Okay, a Loving Wives / Incest vore plot. A wave of mystery radiation bathes a town, turning all men into incest-vores, with 18+ offspring being un-born up their bio-father's urethra. Many supposed dads are surprised by whose cock their kids disappear into. Cue the fattened deliverymen. Does a postman explode? Does one couple's progeny all slide up different dicks? Hey, it's LW.

It should all be obvious. Bio-dad and offspring pass on a sidewalk or fast-food window. Bio-dad's eel stretches, strikes, and swallows, right then and there, ejecting clothes, shoes, and airpods. Swallowed personas take up residence in slim brain lobes and mutually masturbate. Everyone exists Happily Ever After.

See now you understand how easy it is to get INTO the fetish. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE!

 

[Hypoxia]

See now you understand how easy it is to get INTO the fetish. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE!

I am Dyslexia of Borg. Fusistance is retile. Your ass will be laminated.

I am Pentium of Borg. Division is futile. Prepare to be approximated!

I am Flatula of Borg. Await assimilation. Resistance is futile. Pull my finger.

Wait. Flatula of Borg, a big-time vore, assimilates innocent life-forms and farts-out their souls, which stinkingly drift to Heaven, a foul place. No hilarity, especially with incontinent miscarried fetus souls floating about, speechless.

No, that story ain't for LIT. We need happy vore. Should I seek happy vore to see how it's done? How about cycles of unbirths and rebirths? Daughter slides up and down of Dad's urethra time after time and Sonny makes repeated round trips via Mom. But I think back to a phrase:

I wanted to be Born Again but Mum said no.​

Is vore sanctified by any religion? That could get cute.

 

[PrevertOne]

Yes, and it's very deathless.

Did the persona(s) survive inside the eater? How 'deathless' was your result? I ask in case I ever submit some soft vore.

The people in question are alive. They'll reappear, in a way, sometime down the road. As I said, soft vore doesn't always mean death.

 

[PrevertOne]

First rejected a second and then . . .

Okay, so I finally got a response from the moderator. The story's rejected again. Same reason as the first. I will not make another correction so in the future the Hentai World order will go directly from Part Five to Part Seven. Hentai World: Part Six: 'Shrooms can be found on Eka's Portal and Hentai Foundry, without the correction.

Well . . . this is a shock. The story's posted I was looking at my activities list and . . . apparently Laura changed her mind. Very gratifying, I'm just a bit surprised. Anyway, considering the thread, here's a link to see my story as an example https://literotica.com/s/hentai-world-ch-06-shrooms-1

 

[ElectricBlue]

Well . . . this is a shock. The story's posted I was looking at my activities list and . . . apparently Laura changed her mind. Very gratifying, I'm just a bit surprised. Anyway, considering the thread, here's a link to see my story as an example https://literotica.com/s/hentai-world-ch-06-shrooms-1

Laurel, not Laura .

 

[PrevertOne]

Uh,

Laurel, not Laura .

Oops

 

[Hypoxia]

The people in question are alive. They'll reappear, in a way, sometime down the road. As I said, soft vore doesn't always mean death.

Must they reappear? Can they remain conscious within their eater? And if they reappear... how? I envisage offspring sliding back into their parents and then out again, but do they emerge as babes or fast-growing adults? That could bite LIT's 18+ rule.

I recall that my most-viewed and lowest-rated story, Big Banana, has underage siblings morphed into adult banana slugs, mating, and then eaten by a human in a cream pie. Is that hard vore?

 

[PrevertOne]

Must they reappear? Can they remain conscious within their eater? And if they reappear... how? I envisage offspring sliding back into their parents and then out again, but do they emerge as babes or fast-growing adults? That could bite LIT's 18+ rule.

I recall that my most-viewed and lowest-rated story, Big Banana, has underage siblings morphed into adult banana slugs, mating, and then eaten by a human in a cream pie. Is that hard vore?

Take note of the words "in a way".

 

[gordo12]

I tried to find out what was so objectionable. I read the version here, well done BTW, and then couldn't find it on either Elkas or Hentai Foundry?

 

[PrevertOne]

It's there on both.

I tried to find out what was so objectionable. I read the version here, well done BTW, and then couldn't find it on either Elkas or Hentai Foundry?

Eka's and the Foundry have author's listings. I'm probably a ways down, somewhere in the "P" sections. I also have a dash betwixt Prevert and One. I'd link to the story but that is not allowed. I also have to be restrained here as I found I can't promote other sites on the forum. Anyway, thanks for reading and remember the genre contains lots of varied stories.

 

[gordo12]

Send me a PM with a link to one or the other sites. They don't do you any favours at either place. The search function on both is fucked.

You don't show up in searches hyphenated or not, nor does the title of the story ['shrooms.?]

When I finally did a page by page search in the p"s at Hentai it showed 49 stories in your account. But when you click on it you only get 12 and none were the story you've indicated. If you actually have 49 stories there it won't display them.

I had to join Elkas to get to see the member list. Elkas has 68 pages of P members NOT ORGANIZED alphabetically!!!

The story I read here was pretty innocuous so I want to see what set Laurel off.

 

[PrevertOne]

Yeah, it's sort of frustrating.

Send me a PM with a link to one or the other sites. They don't do you any favours at either place. The search function on both is fucked.

You don't show up in searches hyphenated or not, nor does the title of the story ['shrooms.?]

When I finally did a page by page search in the p"s at Hentai it showed 49 stories in your account. But when you click on it you only get 12 and none were the story you've indicated. If you actually have 49 stories there it won't display them.

I had to join Elkas to get to see the member list. Elkas has 68 pages of P members NOT ORGANIZED alphabetically!!!

The story I read here was pretty innocuous so I want to see what set Laurel off.

Yeah, the Foundry can be difficult even for long time members. I think in order to see all the stories, you have to be signed in. The search function takes some getting used to. It took me awhile myself. Anyway, I'll send you a link. See if that works.