less than constructive criticism

[orencool]

The sixth chapter of my story "Mrs Hart's Ache" was posted this evening. Two people have accessed the story. Those two were the people that vetted the story for posting. One left the following comment:

FORGET THE PLOT, ITS ALL ABOUT ME
01/28/05 By: Anonymous in USA
ME ME ME,YOU MAKE WANT TO THROW UP.IF YOU FUCK MISSY SO GOOD WHY WAS SHE FUCKING MARCO AND WHO ELSE.THE REASON SHE GIVE GOOD BLOW JOBS SHE BUSY USING OTHER MEN.YOU AREN'T WRITING THE GREAT AMERICAN NOVEL,YOU WRITING ON LITEROTICA.COM. YOU WASTE MORE SPACE ON B/S.

Interesting comment from an editor, no?

The story is posted under "Novels and Novellas".

This is all new to me, but I believe the link is:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=182562

Please let me know what you think.

orencool.

 

[NoJo]

The sixth chapter of my story "Mrs Hart's Ache" was posted this evening. Two people have accessed the story. Those two were the people that vetted the story for posting. One left the following comment:

FORGET THE PLOT, ITS ALL ABOUT ME
01/28/05 By: Anonymous in USA
ME ME ME,YOU MAKE WANT TO THROW UP.IF YOU FUCK MISSY SO GOOD WHY WAS SHE FUCKING MARCO AND WHO ELSE.THE REASON SHE GIVE GOOD BLOW JOBS SHE BUSY USING OTHER MEN.YOU AREN'T WRITING THE GREAT AMERICAN NOVEL,YOU WRITING ON LITEROTICA.COM. YOU WASTE MORE SPACE ON B/S.

Interesting comment from an editor, no?

The story is posted under "Novels and Novellas".

This is all new to me, but I believe the link is:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=182562

Please let me know what you think.

orencool.

No time to read, but from a quick scan I like the style: lists, notes, comments, indexes. Original and intriguing, just looking at the layout. Of course the content matters too...

Do I have to start from Chapter 1?


Joe

 

[orencool]

less than constructive feedback

Joe:

It's not necessary to start at chapter one, but I am writing it as a novel, so I guess I'd say that you can skip chapter three completely (9 interludes in 10 submissions - interlude 1 has 2 parts) and still get the gist of the story.

The only problem with that is most of the hot stuff is in chapter three.

orencool/

 

[cloudy]

The sixth chapter of my story "Mrs Hart's Ache" was posted this evening. Two people have accessed the story. Those two were the people that vetted the story for posting. One left the following comment:

FORGET THE PLOT, ITS ALL ABOUT ME
01/28/05 By: Anonymous in USA
ME ME ME,YOU MAKE WANT TO THROW UP.IF YOU FUCK MISSY SO GOOD WHY WAS SHE FUCKING MARCO AND WHO ELSE.THE REASON SHE GIVE GOOD BLOW JOBS SHE BUSY USING OTHER MEN.YOU AREN'T WRITING THE GREAT AMERICAN NOVEL,YOU WRITING ON LITEROTICA.COM. YOU WASTE MORE SPACE ON B/S.

Interesting comment from an editor, no?

The story is posted under "Novels and Novellas".

This is all new to me, but I believe the link is:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=182562

Please let me know what you think.

orencool.

How do you know it was from one of your editors?

If you're just going by the views on your submission page, then it probably wasn't one of your editors that left the comment.

Votes are updated in real time, as you get them, but views are only updated several times a day. So, chances are, it wasn't one of your editors that left it. Why don't you just ask them?

 

[orencool]

less than constructive feedback

How do you know it was from one of your editors?

If you're just going by the views on your submission page, then it probably wasn't one of your editors that left the comment.

Votes are updated in real time, as you get them, but views are only updated several times a day. So, chances are, it wasn't one of your editors that left it. Why don't you just ask them?


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cloudy:

I don't have an editor that I know of, and there were only two people listed as having read the story, those that approved the story for posting.

I did send an e-mail to info@literotica.com... I'm waiting for the reply.

orencool

 

[Sherry Hawk]

Sorry, I'm logged in under this name, but this is Cloudy.

Okay, I misunderstood you, sorry.

I can almost guarantee that it wasn't anyone that does the approval process for Lit....I've never known them to comment on anything, other than to hand out the rare "Editor's Choice" things.

It was someone that read your story and commented before your number of views were updated, then. Sometimes, when a story is just posted, your number of votes will be larger than your number of views, but it only lasts a short while until the views are updated. So, your issue is with one of our infamous trolls and not with Lit.

Sorry to put you through a trial by fire, but that's the way it happens, sometimes.

Is it in the "Loving Wives" category by any chance? There's a regular troll that types in all caps, and blasts the subject matter of stories as if he believes it's real. He's an idiot.

(if you want to quote me, then all you have to do is click on the "quote" button at the bottom - it'll save you from c & p a bunch)

 

[thehumpman]

I've read most of the chapters, I found you have a good grip on the terminology used. My only problem was that the story tended to wander from time to time. Kind of got lost a few times. Most of the time the story is enjoyable and well written.