Lesbian Story

[RickyRooster]

I found the link to the only other story I've written called 'Executive Stress'. It was written under my old pseudonym of DanDare [I have really original nicks don't I lol].

I would love to hear any feedback especially from the ladies and especially any critiques as obviously it's a story about lesbian sex written by a guy.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=85072

 

[RickyRooster]

I take it that it's not very good

 

[irishcreamdream]

Mmmmm!

I don't know about everyone else, but that story sure got my panties wet!!
Very nice!

 

[devilslilangel]

Hot!!!!

Dear God. I'm ready for chapter 2!! That story was so HOT!! I am soaked now and aching for what she had. Damn that was hot.

 

[BitterIchor]

It didn't do anything for me. When it comes to a female audience, I suppose it's something more directed at the bisexual ladies out there and the adventurous married ladies. But I suspect the men will like this one the most. You should concentrate on that target group, I'm sure you'll be a smashing hit there.

 

[RickyRooster]

Thanks Everyone

For taking the time to read my little story and post your comments. I've never got round to writing Chapter 2. I know roughly what it would involve but I'm working on making it almost believable without totally suspending disbelief lol.

Cheers,
Ricky