Lesbian story with a buildup...

[Daniela22]

Hi there!

I'm a reader of lesbian stories and noticed that many of them have a buildup that's not longer than one (Lit on-screen) page. However I like being slowly teased into the story and don't care if the characters don't end up in bed right away

Maybe anyone of you has written a story that I might like and haven't found yet.

Please answer here or PM.

Thanks,
Ela

 

[Roxanne Appleby]

Hi there!

I'm a reader of lesbian stories and noticed that many of them have a buildup that's not longer than one (Lit on-screen) page. However I like being slowly teased into the story and don't care if the characters don't end up in bed right away

Maybe anyone of you has written a story that I might like and haven't found yet.

Please answer here or PM.

Thanks,
Ela

My lesbian incest "epic" has 2.5 lit pages before there is any sex (then 4 pages with practicly nothing but sex. Here are the 'dust jacket notes':

Preface: The sex in this story begins on page three, in the section titled, "Mom's seduction," and the mother-daughter incest begins on page six, in the section titled, "The most forbidden fruit."

"Mom's Seduction" describes in lovingly explicit detail a tryst initiated by model-perfect 28-year-old Susan Smith, lesbian epicure extraordinaire, with virtuous, voluptuous 36-year-old Joyce. Present and watching every move is Joyce's daughter, the tender, petite 18-year-old Kara, who Susan has already introduced to the joys of Sapphic sex, and who has revealed to Susan that she lusts for her mother.

"The most forbidden fruit" launches an equally-detailed description of the consummation of Kara's mom-lust, watched and "sponsored" by their mutual lesbian lover, Susan. Between these scenes is one of Susan having sex with the daughter while the mother watches, in a section called, "I'm going to fuck your daughter now . . ."

The first two pages are a fantasy of a different sort and contain no sex. When her darling young lover Kara reveals that she lusts for her struggling single mom, Susan suspects that the girl is being manipulated. Upon investigation she discovers that the mom really is the paragon described by Kara, and is on the brink of financial disaster.

Extremely-wealthy Susan provides a magnificent life-changing gift. She also invites mother and daughter to join her for a lengthy vacation on an idyllic private tropical island. This is the setting for the action described above.

 

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[RedHairedandFriendly]

I'm not too embarrassed to self promote.

Rx: Love - a customer and the pharmacist become friends and lovers

Penny's Passion and Pleasure Ch. 01 - a married woman discovers her bi-sexual desires and acts on them. No heterosexual sex, it is hinted at because Penny is married, but not detailed. (Chapters 2 & 3 are equally fun. )... 2 is lesbian group sex and 3 is bi-sexual sex with the husbands of the ladies involved.

I have some other lesbian stories, where the sex does get started on the first page, but in my opinion they are well developed characters and the story isn't stroke, it is a good story. Those above though the sex starts after the first page, somewhere in the middle of the second or closer to the end.

I hope you enjoy and feel free to comment if you are so inclined.

Red.

 

[rgraham666]

Colleen Thomas Nuff said.

 

[Guest]

My Nude Day contest story is in that category... its only the second one I have ever done... and I think it was done.... well *shrugs*

 

[cloudy]

I have one you might like: Atlantis Revisited, Ch. 2 (link in my sig).

 

[S-Des]

Try North Shore by MY Erotica. It's a brilliant piece both in terms of story and sexuality. It's 8-10 Lit pages (if memory serves), but well worth the read. You'll find it in Erotic Couplings because the story is about a married woman exploring her desire to be with another woman.

 

[angelicminx]

Try North Shore by MY Erotica. It's a brilliant piece both in terms of story and sexuality. It's 8-10 Lit pages (if memory serves), but well worth the read. You'll find it in Erotic Couplings because the story is about a married woman exploring her desire to be with another woman.

Quoting to add the link. ^^^

 

[CharleyH]

Absolutely I have written the most delicious lesbian one-night stand in a public place. It's 2700 words and to most it feels like it wasn't enough. It holds at 4.73 with 173 votes and thousands of reads since ... hm ... 2003-04? Proud of it. You'll love it if you love intelligent women. Lauren Hynde also wrote one called "Letters from Pajhola (sic) which was so ... YUM!

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