Lesbian incest "epic," 30k words, 24-hour proofread turnaround - Anyone crazy enough?

Roxanne Appleby

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Lesbian incest "epic," 30k words, 24-hour proofread turnaround - Anyone crazy enough?

Jan. 7 Edit:
Call for help retracted - I have found a volunteer. My mom has volunteered to do it. (Just kidding!) Not kidding about having someone lined up, though. Thanks so much, everyone, for your kind attention to this post.
Sincerely,
Roxanne Appleby


It's a 30,000 word mother-daughter thing, slightly nasty, but mostly nice, with well rounded characters, not cardboard porn cutouts. It is all-but complete and just needs proofreading for typos and little word change glitches.

My request requires either a complete masochist, or someone who would enjoy reading this kind of thing anyway, and who would enjoy a "thank you" in the Author's Note at the end.

My goal is to submit this to Lit Sunday night, Jan. 8, because I won't have time to “play” for a while after that. I expect that timeframe makes this request unreasonable, but leave it up to you.

FYI, my stories score very high and are well word-smithed. If you like this sort of scenario reading this one would not be at all painful. Pasted below are the “dust jacket notes.”


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Taboo! Lesbian teen's mom-lust
The most forbidden fruit is tasted

The sex in this story begins on page three, in the section titled, "Mom's seduction," and the mother-daughter incest begins on page six, in the section titled, "The most forbidden fruit."

“Mom’s Seduction” describes in lovingly explicit detail a sex act initiated by model-perfect 28-year-old Susan Smith, lesbian epicure <i>extraordinaire</i>, with virtuous, voluptuous 36-year-old Joyce. Present and watching every move is Joyce's daughter, the tender, petite 18-year-old Kara, who Susan has already introduced to the joys of Sapphic sex, and who has revealed to Susan that she lusts for her mother.

"The most forbidden fruit" launches an equally-detailed description of the consummation of Kara's mom-lust, watched and "sponsored" by their mutual lesbian lover, Susan. Between these scenes is one describing Susan having sex with the daughter while the mother watches, in a section titled, “I’m going to fuck your daughter now.”

The first part of the story is a fantasy of a different sort and contains no sex. When her darling young lover Kara reveals that she lusts for her struggling single mom, Susan suspects that the girl is being manipulated. Upon investigation she discovers that the mom really is the paragon described by Kara, and is on the brink of financial disaster.

Extremely-wealthy Susan provides a magnificent life-changing gift. She also invites mother and daughter to join her for a lengthy vacation on an idyllic private tropical island. This is the setting for the action described above.

The character Susan Smith was introduced in "Susan's Teen Lust Satisfied," also on this Web site. It is not necessary to read that story to appreciate this one.
 
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I look forward to seeing it

Send me the link when you post!
Please
 
If needed, send me the link as well. I love to review pictures, stories etc etc :). I'm experienced at it a little so I might be able to point out a misstake sooner than someone else would.
 
Michelrpg said:
If needed, send me the link as well. I love to review pictures, stories etc etc :). I'm experienced at it a little so I might be able to point out a misstake sooner than someone else would.
Thanks Michel and everyone else who responded via PM, or even thought twice about such an outragious request. The task has been taken on and completed, and the strory should be up in less than a week.
Sincerely,
Roxanne
 
30k words in 24 hours? On a volunteer basis? On a weekend? Are you nuts?

:smile: Good luck, I'll read it when it is posted.

I imagine I could fill this request, IF the story was clean and simply in need of proofing. I am glad you found someone else though.
 
kbate said:
30k words in 24 hours? On a volunteer basis? On a weekend? Are you nuts?

:smile: Good luck, I'll read it when it is posted.

I imagine I could fill this request, IF the story was clean and simply in need of proofing. I am glad you found someone else though.
Hi, Kbate! I have enjoyed some of your posts elsewhere.

Short answer: Yes, I am nuts, but a very kind and generous lady was even nuts-er, and did this for me. Actually it was clean and she found less than a dozen genuine typos, but she took the opportunity to carry on a vendetta against excessive use of quote marks around undisputed terms, searching-and-destroying around 30 of them. In the process she made me a better writer with her "observation" regarding my "overuse" of quotation marks around undisputed "terms and phrases." :D

You'll read it when it's posted? Really? I'm honored, and hope you enjoy.

I am biased (just a little!) but I think this turned out to be an interesting and very nice story. Not to mention that it has about 15,000 words (at least) of very explicit, hot girl-girl sex description. The device by which the incest is made to occur without stripping away the shame and yet still allowing a happy ending was very effective, I think (biased), and I will be interested to hear what others say.
Regards,
Roxanne
 
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It sounds like one I'd enjoy reading, though there's no way I could read and edit that much in that short of a time frame.

I'm glad you found someone to do it for you.
 
lilredjammies said:
*chuckle*

Good girl!

Is the story up yet?
Sorry, doll. Thanks again!

Taboo! Lesbian Teen's Mom-Lust is not up yet - hopefully it will Saturday.

I considered holding it until Mother's Day, but the mom and daughter characters were just too eager to get it on, and refused to wait.

PS. Evocative poem, Jammies. It's in non-erotic, but somehow the imagery of a sweet lady's nude 3-D roundness all slippery with bubbles in a nice warm tub of whatever shape has at least a certain sensuality.
 
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