delicate_yielding
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- May 24, 2008
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Hi all~
Finished my story, so I'm in a good mood
Anyways to the details!
It's about a first experience for a lonely woman after her roommate gives her a massage.
It has a lot more dialogue and went slower than I had planned, so I'm looking for an editor who doesn't mind making some content/believability/pacing suggestions and maybe even being a little mean XD
PM, e-mail, or post here if you're up for it.
Cheers
Finished my story, so I'm in a good mood
Anyways to the details!
It's about a first experience for a lonely woman after her roommate gives her a massage.
It has a lot more dialogue and went slower than I had planned, so I'm looking for an editor who doesn't mind making some content/believability/pacing suggestions and maybe even being a little mean XD
PM, e-mail, or post here if you're up for it.
Cheers