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The arrow found its mark in the skull of a Krull soldier. A sticky splash of blood splattered onto the grass. Even as the soldier's lifeless corpse was falling to the ground, the sky blackened with a rain of arrows.
The front line went down; yet they kept coming. There must have been hundreds of them. Dressed all in black leather and mail, the Krull army was an intimidating presence. The calvary was in front, flags waving and lances shining. They were followed by the infantry, weilding mornac blades and battleaxes.

High in the main tower, the elven council was in turmoil. Amidst the the voices, one voice spoke out.
"Please, my brothers and sisters. Listen to what I have to say," said the Queen of Eldamir. The voices died out as the others turned their attention to the high queen.
"We must decide, and it must be soon. We can't hold out much longer against a force this powerful. Of course we might keep their footsoldiers away from the stronghold with our arrows, but what happens when the quivers run dry? We are not invincible."
"But surely there must be another way," one of the elders said. "It is not possible that this can be the only way to defeat Khan's forces."
"I'm sorry, but the prophecy clearly states that there is only One who can defeat Khan, and unless I'm mistaken, there is no such One amongst us. Now we must choose; what is your decision?"

The screams of the dying rang out across the battlefield. The Krull invasion swept across the plain towards the fortress. Only one man stood in their way. As he watched the army of monsters rush at him, Darius thought of his wife and son. He pictured in his mind the faces of his family, and the way they died at the hands of Khan's men. He saw his sister's face as she cried out in anguish as they tortured her. And it was all because of him. He was responsible.
"No, It's not my fault," he thought. "It was Khan who ordered the executions. It was he who is to blame for their deaths." With that thought, Darius let out a cry of rage and met the onrush headon. Swinging his mithril blade with precision, Darius cut through the footsoldiers like warm butter. As the bodies fell around him, he released his body to the fire within. He was a warrior of Eldamir, defender of light. He saw nothing but the shapes of his attackers. As he thrust at a Krull on his right, he noticed a sudden flash of motion to his left flank. He turned to parry, but he was to late. The tip of the sword ripped through the silk sleeve, and cut deep into the flesh of his arm, glancing off the bone.
Darius let out a scream of pain, and decapitated the Krull footsoldier in a single blow. But doing so cost him a split second of concentration, and he felt the sickening feeling of steel cutting through the flesh at his waist, just below the armor. He turned he could feel a warm, stickiness running down his legs, and realized he would not make it through this battle alive. He thought once again of his wife and child, and uttered one last phrase. "Live for me," he whispered to no one.
He heard the sound of a blade whistling through the air, and felt a splash of blood on the side of his face. He soon realized it was his own, and felt himself falling to the ground. As he lay there alone, he saw the bodies littered around him, and as he saw the monsters moving in on him, he knew his death was honorable in the eyes of the Light.

The high queen of the Elves of Light watched the dark forces climbing the castle walls. She couldn't believe what she had to do, but she knew there was no other way. The council was in agreement.
She stood high in the tower of the Elven Stronghold, the bodies of her companions around her. The decision had been unanimous. To destroy the dark forces, they must destroy their home. They must undo what they had accomplished over the past millenia. To think of all the memories set in these forests, the martyrs who had died to defend it. All would soon be no more.
As she stood in the councilroom, she thought about her life, and what she had accomplished throughout her 746 years. She thought about the decisions she had made along the way, and what might have been. She knew such thoughts were futile, but she couldn't help thinking just the same.
She was brought back to reality by the sound of splintering wood. She looked up and saw a number of Krull raiders charge through the broken oak door.
"In the name of the Light, I carry out his command."
With that exclamation, the High Queen of Eldamir released a final, powerful blast of energy. There was a brilliant flash of light, then an earthshaking roar as the wave of invisible force swept through the Krull ranks. Screams of anguish rang out as the black army disentigrated in the stream of light. Then there was silence. The formerly beautiful landscape was turned into a barren wasteland. Nothing remained of the tower, the Elves of Light, or the Krull. The darkness was no more.
 
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Darion walked down the path, admiring the beauty of the forest around him. The tall trees stood majestic in the moonlight, like great, sleeping giants guarding the forest. The woodland animals were silent, and the only sound that could be heard was the nearby waterfall.
Darion was a Shadow Elf, a race of nocturnal elves which lived in the Forest of Miria. Standing six foot three, he was an impressive specimen of his kind, with medium length black hair, and pale blue eyes.
As a Ranger of Elderath, Darion was a defender of the forest. His duty was to protect the woods and wildlife within from intruders. Every night he patrolled the boundries of his sector of the forest. This was his home. His world. He knew he could never let anything happen to it.
He stopped by a spring to have a bite to eat. He checked the ground around him for signs of any unwanted company, and finding nothing, he sat down and opened his knapsack. As he pulled out his midnight meal, he heard something. He recognized that sound; that was the sound made by something trying not to be uncovered. Darion lept to his feet and scanned his surroundings, his hand on his knife.
 
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OOC

OOC: Sorry about any typos you see in this story... I can usually fix all of them in a day or so, but if I miss any important ones, be sure to tell me about them.
Also, feel free to submit any suggestions (on plot, imagery, etc), even if you're not planning on adding to the story. You can e-mail me at lormegil@hotmail.com
I didn't hold a casting call for this thread because it's based on a book I'm writing, and participation is completely optional. So if you have any interesting, middle-earth style characters (low-level mages only. keep it fair), then feel free to contribute to the storyline. Hope you enjoy.
 
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"I don't sense anything. Whatever it was must have just been passing by," thought Darion. "But still... it should leave some sign of it's presence. I think I'll check for tracks, just in case."
Still keeping a lookout for any danger, Darion walked toward where he heard the noise. Everything was silent. There were no signs of animals around; not even the usual night creatures were out tonight.
"That's odd," Darion thought to himself. "There should at least be broken plants or branches. It's as if there was never anything here at all." Not finding any traces was unusual for Darion, being as he was an elite member of the Elderath Rangers. It was rare for any creature to elude the trained eyes of a Ranger, and it made Darion nervous to think what could be out there.
"It didn't even leave a scent in the air, much less tracks." Suddenly, he heard another sound. It was different this time; more deliberate, or maybe whatever it was was less cautious around him now. Darion flicked his hand downward and suddenly he was weilding his trusty dagger. It emitted a soft blue glow in the moonlight, warning him that something was nearby. He scanned the forest again. Still nothing... there!
He thought he saw a leaf twitch on his right. He turned to look at it but saw nothing. He assumed a defensive stance and waited for whatever it was to show its face. If it was truly a threat, then it would not be afraid to present itself to him.
Thump-thump... Thump-thump
He could hear his heart beating; could feel the pulse in his head.
What could be out there...
 
Suddenly, the air seemed to form into a creature, black and scaley. It was about four feet to the shoulder, covered in glossy scales, and possesed sharp claws and tusks. There was a long mane of silky hair that ran down the monster's back, and trapised of at the base of the spine.
The creature growled, then lunged at Darion, teeth bared. Darion deftly lept aside, and thrust at the dark shape, but it somehow eluded him and riposted with a massive paw. Darion stumbled backward as the blow hit him square in the chest.
"What is this thing," Darion thought as he regained his balance.
The creature let out a bloodcurdling howl, then pounced again on the elf-thing. This time Darion tried a new approach, and when the beast hit him, he crouched beneath it and slit it's belly with his knife. He felt something graze his shoulder as the flung the creature over him, and then he watched in astonishment as the black figure dissolved into shadow and disappeared.
 
"What is happening here," Darion thought as he stared at the space where the creature last was. Not a trace remained of his attacker; it was as if the last few minutes had never happened. Darion twitched his ears, listening for any sounds of another creature, but there was nothing. The only sound was the gentle roar of the nearby waterfall.
Shrugging, Darion sat back down to his meal, but this time he was paying close attention to his surroundings. He had never encountered a creature like that before, nor had he heard of any sightings in the area. He could still visualize the attack in his mind, feel the fright he experienced when he realized the monster could counter his attacks. It was rare for anything to react fast enough to dodge an elf's attack, and even rarer for something to riposte and land the blow.
Finishing the last of his dinner, Darion stood and started off to finish his rounds. As he walked away from the pool, he was unaware of the dark figure watching him from the trees.
 
Mathias watched the young elf leave, smiling to himself. Yes, this was definately the One. The One fortold long ago in the prophecy of light. Mathias could hardly believe it, but he had finally found the Fortold. This young warrior didn't know it yet, but he would become a legend remembered for ages; the savior of Miria. But it was apparent that he would need some help along the way.
The seer of ages shook his head and laughed to himself as he faded back into the darkness from which he came.
 
Hikage looked around. There were people everywhere -- too many people for his tastes.
He stood at the entryway of the pub, staring suspiciously at no one in particular, taking in the scene. There had to be at least thirty or forty people on the first floor alone. Luckily, most of them were tanked, so he would have no trouble making a profit off this crowd.
He walked over to the bar and ordered a mug of ale. No one seemed to notice the stranger in the brown cloak. No one ever did. He sipped his tankard of ale, all the while looking around for easy prey. He soon layed eyes upon a middle-aged man at a table on the far wall. Setting down his ale, Hikage stood and walked down the row of stools towards the man, keeping an eye out for anyone who might recognize him. When he reached the table where the man sat, he took one last look around, then pretended to trip and fall into the drunkard. Quickly, he plucked the man's money pouch from his belt, and laughing, patted the old man on the back and slurred something unintelligible. The man just laughed and raised his mug, then returned to his ale.
Hikage walked back along the row of barstools, plucking money pouches from wherever he could get his hands on them. When he got back to his seat, he smirked to himself, and sipped some more ale. Finally, he downed the last drops from his mug, then left a few coins on the countertop and casually walked out the door.
"It is getting too easy," he thought to himself as he counted the moneybags he had swiped. "I need more of a challenge to keep myself busy."
He put away his newly aquired currency, and started off down the path towards Artha. He had not gotten far when he heard shouting coming from the pub.
"That's my cue to exit," he said to himself, and he took off down the path, leaving a bar full of rioting customers in his wake.
 
Darion leaped across the gap between trees. His feet landed soundly on the branch and he continued to run without change in velocity. His footsteps were almost silent, but his breathing was heavy and rushed. His pulse roared in his ears, like continuous thunder, and sweat poured down his face. His tunic was near soaked and hung loose from his broad shoulders, weighing him down.
He finally reached sight of the village and froze in horror at what he saw. His village was in flames. The blaze was brighter than the sun; the smoke stung his eyes and burned his nose. This was his home... incinerating before his eyes. The let out a cry of anguish, his arms raised in despair.
But he couldn't just stand by and watch. He had to do something to stop the fire before it burned the rest of the forest. He quickly began to focus his mind. He closed his eyes and felt the power well up within him. Then he concentrated on suppressing the blaze. It slowly began to shrink back into itself, but Darion knew he couldn't hold out long enough to end the fire.
"What am I going to do," he thought desperately. Then he heard a voice, calm and comforting from over his shoulder.
 
The High Druid known as Mirloth stood behind Darion, his eyes filled with a calm reassurance. His voice set Darion's mind at ease, and his face showed a wisdom beyond his years. Even as the druid spoke, Darion knew everything would be alright.
"Focus," the elder said. "You must concentrate. Only when you have achieved understanding of your foe will you be able to defeat it."
 
consentrating more on stoping the fire ,Darion, with all his strength tried to contain the fire that was ablaze in his home.

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