Late Wife's Daughter

[Fuumayami]

Could there be a story here.
A man lost his wife 2-4 years ago. He is finally able to move on but there's a knock at his door. He opens the door and a young lady is standing there who looks identical to his late wife. She ask for her, but sadly, he tells her what happened. The man remembers his late wife telling him that she gave up her baby for adoption before she ever met him.
They want to keep in touch. The young lady wants to know her mother through her husband. As they spend more time together, they begin to have feelings for each other. Ultimately they fall for each other and have sex.

 

[sirhugs]

a few interesting twists there

 

[Rob_Royale]

I'd say there's a story there but a very predictable one. Unless there's something more plot-wise what will keep a reader reading?

 

[Fuumayami]

I'd say there's a story there but a very predictable one. Unless there's something more plot-wise what will keep a reader reading?

That's true, you made me ponder about what to add. So I got this idea that, instead of a late wife, she's still alive. And the daughter, coming around trying to spend time with her birth mother then builds a relationship with the father which becomes romantic. How about that?

 

[Rob_Royale]

To me it sounds like a story that would end in heartbreak and that's not what people are looking for in their taboo stories. Not my thing at all.

 

[Fuumayami]

To me it sounds like a story that would end in heartbreak and that's not what people are looking for in their taboo stories. Not my thing at all.

Make sense. I'll cross it out

 

[TheArsonist]

I'd say there's a story there but a very predictable one. Unless there's something more plot-wise what will keep a reader reading?

Is that necessarily a big problem for the genre?

But OK. This feels like a (mildly taboo) romance story to me. The ending is given: the characters get together. So the plot is about overcoming whatever forces keep them apart.

This could be something external, let's say some family members who disapprove of the relationship – for example, what if the guy and his wife had a child, who thinks this half-sister is a fortune hunter trying to claim their mother's inheritance? Or it could be something internal; either just the natural hesitancy to get into a pseudo-incestuous relationship, or something more concrete, like a sense of guilt over the wife's death on the husband's part, or a feeling of being unwanted on the daughter's part. (Ideally you have a combination of both external and internal forces.)

Here's one idea:

The wife died in a car crash (less than 2 years ago). We learn that both the husband and their child (an adult daughter) suspect that it was suicide, and blame him for not preventing it, as she seemed depressed in the days before her death. He found a letter from her on the day she died that he thinks is a suicide letter, but he hid it and never read it. Neither of them ever knew about the daughter given up for adoption. We also find out early on that the returning daughter has a secret and is not telling the full truth, but not what it is.

Both of them are torn by guilt and try to resist, but eventually the husband and the adopted daughter give in to their attraction and begin a relationship. However, then her secret is discovered: she contacted her mother a short time before she died. They met up, but it didn't go well (the mother wasn't ready to reveal her existence to her husband and other daughter), and they had a fight, where the daughter, distraught, threatened to "out" her and ruin her family. This is why the wife was acting so weird in the days before she died. The husband lets slip that he thinks her death was a suicide, and it now looks like the daughter is "to blame." This drives them apart.

After some wallowing, the husband finally reads the "suicide letter," only to discover that it is no such thing, but a letter to apologize and try to mend things with the daughter, and showing that she was about to reveal the truth to the husband and other daughter, hoping they could be a family. Tragically, she died in an accident before she could follow through. In the end the couple reunite and reconcile, and the other daughter accepts their relationship.

 

[DeusAudivit]

A Brief Summary of “Echoes of Her Smile”: A little story I am working on I have done 600 odd words but I am still a romantic so I feel it is rubbish compared to the erotic stories you all write.

Mark, mourning the loss of his beloved wife, Clara, seeks fleeting comfort in their cottage through preserving memories of her. Later, after two years, a strange woman named Lily emerges, claiming that Clara is actually her biological mother, who had given up their daughter for adoption in her younger years.

Through their incredible conversations about Lily’s search for her mother and through Mark’s memories of Clara, the untold regrets and love of Clara are revealed.

While Mark develops his relationship with Lily, he is able to rediscover the true Clara through Lily and even establish a new relationship with her that is healing in nature. Grief, identity, and the power of love as the continuation of life, rather than its end, are explored.

 

[Gunter99]

Good idea

 

[sirhugs]

A Brief Summary of “Echoes of Her Smile”: A little story I am working on I have done 600 odd words but I am still a romantic so I feel it is rubbish compared to the erotic stories you all write.

Mark, mourning the loss of his beloved wife, Clara, seeks fleeting comfort in their cottage through preserving memories of her. Later, after two years, a strange woman named Lily emerges, claiming that Clara is actually her biological mother, who had given up their daughter for adoption in her younger years.

Through their incredible conversations about Lily’s search for her mother and through Mark’s memories of Clara, the untold regrets and love of Clara are revealed.

While Mark develops his relationship with Lily, he is able to rediscover the true Clara through Lily and even establish a new relationship with her that is healing in nature. Grief, identity, and the power of love as the continuation of life, rather than its end, are explored.

I know that you re just sucking for compliments, but nothing wrong with being a romantic. There is a whole category for Romance stories. Plus some of us like a bit more romance in with our smut- you can find a lot of that in the Mature category or Erotic couplings. Plus of course Non-human.

 

[DeusAudivit]

'sucking for compliments' I only do that with my bitch wife. or i make her suck and I watch.

 

[Gunter99]

'sucking for compliments' I only do that with my bitch wife. or i make her suck and I watch.

Good to see the the 'lesbian power couple' of Literotica posting stuff

 

[DeusAudivit]

Good to see the the 'lesbian power couple' of Literotica posting stuff

Power Couple, not sure about that. in fact, I am a mere novice. But thank you for the confidence boost.

 

[Rob_Royale]

A Brief Summary of “Echoes of Her Smile”: A little story I am working on I have done 600 odd words but I am still a romantic so I feel it is rubbish compared to the erotic stories you all write.

We all started somewhere with the same doubts. My first story was kicked back by Laurel three times because my writing wasn't there yet. I shelved it for two years and wrote something else, that finally got published. Just keep at it.

Edit - your 'Echoes' idea is very good.

 

[DeusAudivit]

We all started somewhere with the same doubts. My first story was kicked back by Laurel three times because my writing wasn't there yet. I shelved it for two years and wrote something else, that finally got published. Just keep at it.

Edit - your 'Echoes' idea is very good.

Thank You P.S Loved your cougar on a cruse story.

 

[Carnevil9]

I love the "father with deceased wife's daughter" theme. It has a tiny bit of incest feel to it, even if they are not really related. I dabble with it peripherally with my You Have to Go to Mass series.

But the daughter would have to be the pursuer, not the dad. Otherwise it gets creepy.

 

[VerbalAbuse]

so the twist is that the "daughter" has a dick, a very large one at that, and that she fucks the man in the ass...

 

[DeusAudivit]

"Is. is Clara here?" the woman stammered. Mark's throat began to tighten. He motioned her gently inside, his heart a drumbeat of sorrow and curiosity. She identified herself as Lily, a woman who'd grown up in a small town hours away, raised by adoptive parents who'd never spoken of her biological mother. On her 18th birthday, she'd found a letter kept among her mother's things, a name and an address: Clara's. The letter was heartfelt, almost apologetic-a plea for space in a life cut short by circumstance.

As Lily spoke, Mark’s thoughts slipped to Clara’s last weeks. She had confided in him how her hands shook as she admitted regrets over the child she’d given up in her early twenties, a decision carved out of fear and desperate need for anonymity. “I wanted to be brave,” she had whispered. “But I didn’t know how.”

Meanwhile, Lily had fitted together fractured elements of Clara's past. "She described you in the letter," she said, her eyes finding his." Told me of the man who held her hand through it all.

 

[DeusAudivit]

this conversation leads to further meetings and maybe more. I am still thinking a slow romantic burn not a bed over let me fuck you story.


Their closeness intensified, never in leaps and bounds but in tender, gnawing steps.

 

[dirk2024]

Is that necessarily a big problem for the genre?

Most successful Taboo stories have Happily Ever After endings.

The wife died in a car crash (less than 2 years ago). We learn that both the husband and their child (an adult daughter) suspect that it was suicide, and blame him for not preventing it, as she seemed depressed in the days before her death. He found a letter from her on the day she died that he thinks is a suicide letter, but he hid it and never read it. Neither of them ever knew about the daughter given up for adoption. We also find out early on that the returning daughter has a secret and is not telling the full truth, but not what it is.

Yeah, 'cause suicide is sexy.

 

[DeusAudivit]

Most successful Taboo stories have Happily Ever After endings.



Yeah, 'cause suicide is sexy.

Its also painless! Or so the song said. But of course not for those who are left behind.

 

[DeusAudivit]

I have just finished 750 words on this, its like pulling teeth. Even though there is no sex in my version of this story, I think its done. posting it with the hope it gets accepted. ok I lied added another 20 words but still no sex just a hint of what might cum

 

[Rob_Royale]

Thank You P.S Loved your cougar on a cruse story.

Thanks for reading! Another threesome story you might like is Hot Rod Honeys.

 

[KindredFlame]

Thanks for reading! Another threesome story you might like is Hot Rod Honeys.

I guess I am going to have to read that one to her today. I told you 750 word’s story’s are not as easy as you would think.

 

[TheArsonist]

I'd say there's a story there but a very predictable one. Unless there's something more plot-wise what will keep a reader reading?

Is that necessarily a big problem for the genre?

Most successful Taboo stories have Happily Ever After endings.

What sort of non-sequitur is that? I was asking if a predictable plot is a problem for the erotica genre, not about HEA endings.

Yeah, 'cause suicide is sexy.

If you read to the end of the post, you would see that it wasn't in fact a suicide. In general, plenty of LitErotica stories take place against some tragic backdrop.