Late Wife's Daughter

[Fuumayami]

Could there be a story here.
A man lost his wife 2-4 years ago. He is finally able to move on but there's a knock at his door. He opens the door and a young lady is standing there who looks identical to his late wife. She ask for her, but sadly, he tells her what happened. The man remembers his late wife telling him that she gave up her baby for adoption before she ever met him.
They want to keep in touch. The young lady wants to know her mother through her husband. As they spend more time together, they begin to have feelings for each other. Ultimately they fall for each other and have sex.

 

[sirhugs]

a few interesting twists there

 

[Rob_Royale]

I'd say there's a story there but a very predictable one. Unless there's something more plot-wise what will keep a reader reading?

 

[Fuumayami]

I'd say there's a story there but a very predictable one. Unless there's something more plot-wise what will keep a reader reading?

That's true, you made me ponder about what to add. So I got this idea that, instead of a late wife, she's still alive. And the daughter, coming around trying to spend time with her birth mother then builds a relationship with the father which becomes romantic. How about that?

 

[Rob_Royale]

To me it sounds like a story that would end in heartbreak and that's not what people are looking for in their taboo stories. Not my thing at all.

 

[Fuumayami]

To me it sounds like a story that would end in heartbreak and that's not what people are looking for in their taboo stories. Not my thing at all.

Make sense. I'll cross it out